Comments | heavenisonfire: ❝i want your love; i don't want to be friends❞

moirae in heavenisonfire

❝i want your love; i don't want to be friends❞

Dec 27, 2009 23:47

Title: a wedding dance
Series: Axis Powers Hetalia
Words: ~850
Characters: Hungary ; Prussia ; Austria (Prussia/Hungary/Austria)
Rating: PG
Warnings: kisses ; random style and capitilization
Summary: Written for peekaydee's birthday. Even though it’s Austria and Hungary’s wedding day, Prussia claims just once dance with the bride.

( she’s not quite sure what to make of all this. she didn’t even know that he was coming today, to her wedding. so what else can she do, but extend her hand towards him, and will her heart to stop fluttering as he takes it, and then places one hand on the small of her back? she can’t stop from leaning up to whisper in his ear. )

✦fanfiction, ❥pairing: prussia/hungary, ✶character: austria, ❥pairing: austria/hungary, ✶character: hungary, ✖birthday, ✶character: prussia, ✤fandom: hetalia

Comments 27

satoru_13 December 28 2009, 08:02:22 UTC

...DAAAWWW, ;A;. This was beautifully written, and that last part, when Prussia just walks away...effectively broke my heart. It's also wonderful how you refer to immortality, and how they are doing such human things, even though they are not.

...I'm also loving the lack of capital letters and use of italics for dialogue, it makes it feel like the script is just flowing on and builds the mood of the story.

I think this is one of the best fics you've written, <333.

moirae December 28 2009, 21:15:41 UTC

Wow, thank you so much! &hearts

initials December 28 2009, 08:04:40 UTC

You gave me a heartache. ;A;

moirae December 28 2009, 21:15:29 UTC

...in a good way? ;3;

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moirae December 28 2009, 21:15:20 UTC

THANK YOU. I'm really glad it turned out well because I sort of derped on the style cause I was writing at midnight.

midori_lover December 28 2009, 09:28:31 UTC

;~;

This is one of my favorite fics of yours. It's just so heartaching. I just love the interaction between Prussia and Hungary it's just so in character and tragic. And my heart really broke when Hungary whispers I love you and doesn't know to whom she's addressing the words.

Just...so beautifully written.

moirae December 28 2009, 21:05:56 UTC

Thank you so much! &hearts

sylphiawings December 28 2009, 11:37:25 UTC

oh dear god, I loved this ;___;
I've always wondered about Prussia's feeling when they married, but I never thought of Hungary's. I love the fact you connected the immortality; just makes it even more heartbreaking ♥

Hallie, you make the best fics ever. >< I've always wanted a fic of my favorite OT3 from you.

moirae December 28 2009, 21:05:14 UTC

o///o

thank you so much, dear!
glad you enjoyed it &hearts