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Fic: Shouldn't Have Loved

Nov 02, 2011 10:49

Title: Shouldn't Have Loved
Author: Mary (stillxmyxheart)
Beta: Lindsay (rowofstars)
Rating: R (language, violence)
Genre: Drama, Angst
Warnings: Domestic abuse
Word Count: 8,700
Characters/Pairings: David, Hannah, Juliet, Seth (Hannah/Seth)

( The doorbell rang, pulling David from his musings on the two files spread open in front of him. )

#backstory, character: hannah cole, !!ficverse: an eye for an eye, character: david cole, !fic, character: seth thompson, character: juliet grayson, *rating: r, pairing: hannah/seth

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samajama224 November 2 2011, 20:57:40 UTC

OKAY. READY TO GET MY SETH BASHING ON!

GAH. So much Daddy/David loving.
Also can't even with the feelings already. *eyes Seth* DID YOU HIT HER? I WILL SMITE YOU.

Hannah was quiet a moment, and then she nodded almost imperceptibly, whispering, "Yes."

"Son of a bitch," David muttered, glancing away as he ran a hand over his mouth.
THAT BOY BETTER STEP BACK OR I WILL HIT HIM WHERE IT COUNTS.

There is nothing wrong with you," David said fiercely, holding her tighter and fighting the fast rising urge to grab the gun from the top drawer of his desk and -
ME TOO DAVID. ME TOO.

"Is she - well, no, of course she's not all right." She looked at David and her lips twitched. "Explains the gun though. Can't say I disapprove."
*claps* Glad we're all on the same page here.

one eyebrow quirked
*dies* That's my favorite.

grilled cheese with bacon and tomatoes, Hannah's favorite comfort food
*dies* I think that's what I"m having for dinner. Except in quesadilla form.

Seth was just another one of those assholes who got bored in a relationship but was too much of a damn coward to just end it, and either too stupid or too arrogant to make a better show at hiding his affair.
GIANT ASSHOLE DOUCHE-CICLE FUCKTARD MORONFACE SHITHEAD.

"Whatever, I have to leave for a date in a few minutes anyway."
EVERYTHING I JUST SAID TIMES FIFTY.

"Did you run home to daddy? Did he make you feel better?"
YOU BETTER MOVE BEFORE I MAKE YOU MOVE.

"If you hit me, you better be prepared to go all the way, because guess what, hon? I hit back."

She tried to pull her arm from his grip, but he squeezed tighter, smirking when she cried out. She raised her other hand to try to pry his fingers from around her arm, but he grabbed her wrist, yanking her hand away, and she gasped.
IF YOU'D LIKE YOUR DICK TO REMAIN ATTACHED TO YOUR BODY, GTFO.

David's voice softened dangerously. "You should be."
Oh, hello.

"In a minute. Let's eat, I'm starving."

"Threatening to kill a man will do that to you," Juliet muttered, casting David a sidelong look.
You are always hungry, David And Jules is winning. As usual.

She spent the next several minutes happily slicing and shredding, scattering lace and silk and satin all over the bed, flimsy bras and tiny panties and negligees that she'd never really cared for. The only reason she bought and wore any of it was to make him happy. For the three years they'd been having sex, all she'd ever cared about was pleasing him, but she could feel another one of those realizations beginning to creep over her, that he had never really seemed to care about pleasing her, unless he could get something in return.
Didn't MAMA!Jules teach you to never let anybody treat you like that?

She hadn't yet worn it for him, and he hadn't seen it, and she carefully tucked the bag into the box, vowing to save it for someone who actually deserved to see her in it.
WEAR IT FOR ELI. I DOUBLE DOG DARE YOU.

David and Juliet joined her in the bedroom once more.
I'm sorry. I can't hear you over DAVID AND JULES IN A BEDROOM.

If you mess with Hannah again, I will kill you.
So.. Scary.. So... Hot.

"I'm glad, because I'm keeping you around forever."

"Oh, really?" She arched an eyebrow at him, trying to maintain their teasing flow, but she felt a small flutter at his words.

"Mmhmm," he hummed.

"Do I get a say in this?"

He smiled brightly. "Nope."
*dead*

stillxmyxheart November 2 2011, 21:10:28 UTC

GAH. So much Daddy/David loving.
DADDY!DAVID FTW ALWAYS.

*dies* That's my favorite.
BROW!GRON IS EVERYONE'S FAVORITE.

Oh, hello.
MMHMM. PROTECTIVE!DADDY!DAVID IS ONE OF MY FAVORITES, FOREVER.

You are always hungry, David And Jules is winning. As usual.
Well, he tends to work up an appetite. And mmhmm XD

WEAR IT FOR ELI. I DOUBLE DOG DARE YOU.
MAYBE SHE WILL.

So.. Scary.. So... Hot.
Oh, yes.

*dead*
RIDICULOUSLY OTP, ALWAYS, EVEN WHEN THEY'RE ALL UST-Y BFFS.

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