FICLET FRIDAY THE SIXTH: ROWOFSTARS

Nov 04, 2011 11:05



line yourself in chalk part 4, (David/Juliet), G, i move through a different sort of space

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#backstory, !ficlet friday, pairing: david/juliet, character: juliet grayson, *rating: g, !!ficverse: an eye for an eye, character: david cole

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happyfew November 4 2011, 19:52:31 UTC
JUUUUUUUUUUULES

“It’s orientation, actually,” she corrects. “The real deal will be sometime three months from now when we’re finally trusted to be in the field without a leash.” Oh snappppp

Later, when Frank snatches her plate from the table, she finds his card. On the back is a phone number that she knows isn’t a Bureau number. Feelingssssss

Ugh, all this backstory is delicious. ♥

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rowofstars November 4 2011, 19:59:01 UTC
Backstory is my favorite. XD

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professor_spork November 4 2011, 20:53:36 UTC
“Yeah, Hannah,” he nods, grinning, pleased that at least one person bothers to notice or care about the existence of the most important thing in his life.

Bawwwwwwwwh

She ignores the comfort with which he seems to have invaded her little space, watching as he steals a fry from her plate, now pushed to the side and relatively discarded, and shrugs again.

THEY'RE SO INTIMATE AND THEY'RE STILL BASICALLY STRANGERS AT THIS POINT I CANNOT

She snorts a laugh and shakes her head. “Two weeks ago you were shouting about how we should all just quit and go home if we were going to treat the simulations like a game.”
He turns serious for a moment, and her breathing all but stops when his eyes meet hers.
“I said I’d trust you.”
...
He looks back at her, and reaches out to touch her hand, thumb passing over her knuckles briefly. “You’re not like them.”

;OIGHOESRGHSNEKRJGNEKRJGHAKE.RHGAKEG

“You knew when I gave you that card that you could call me anytime, right?” he asks, smiling a little. He waits for her to nod and then says, “I don’t just ( ... )

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rowofstars November 4 2011, 21:06:44 UTC
JULES NEEDS A FUCKING ROOM FOR ALL HER AWARDS.

THEY'RE SO INTIMATE AND THEY'RE STILL BASICALLY STRANGERS AT THIS POINT I CANNOT

XD THEY JUST MAKE THEMSELVES THAT WAY. I hope it's not too strange or weird. The next couple of ficlets should help explain a little more about what they are thinking and feeling.

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samajama224 November 5 2011, 03:38:20 UTC
with him
*DIES*

She tries not to think about earlier, about his little blonde haired daughter and her shiny shoes, how the little girl’s mere presence made him beam from ear to ear, wider and brighter than she’d thought possible for the usually reserved David Cole.
OMAHGAWD. The warm fuzzies. Can't. Even. Can't even can. Just. Can't.

She tries not to watch the movement of his throat or the flick of his tongue over his lips. “I’d trust you now.”
SO MUCH UST. HOLY MOSES.

“I said I’d trust you.”
^^^^^^^^^^^

On the back is a phone number that she knows isn’t a Bureau number.
FLIRTY!DAVID. WUT.

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“I don’t just hand them out to any greenie on the street, Agent Grayson.”
STOP. JUST STOP IT RIGHT NOW. DON'T STOP. NEVER STOP.

“Thanks, sir, I -”

“David.”
STOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOP IT.

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rowofstars November 6 2011, 00:57:40 UTC
SO MUCH UST. HOLY MOSES.
NGL, this is really my Gary lust coming out. I project a lot. XD

FLIRTY!DAVID. WUT.
Actually, no. Sorry. He wasn't flirting. I feel like I haven't done a very good job of explaining how they even ended up talking, so I will have to correct that in the next few ficlets.

STOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOP IT.
NEVER. XD

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samajama224 November 7 2011, 21:52:19 UTC
Projection is fine. ;)

Actually, no. Sorry. He wasn't flirting.
Hmmmm. Yeah, I think I got that by the end. But at first everything was all UST-y in my head. But.... that may have been *me* projecting. So. :D

FINE. DON'T STOP. IT'S FINE. I'll JUST MELT INTO A PUDDLE OF SAM.

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rowofstars November 6 2011, 00:59:01 UTC
Nervous Jules in that sense is odd. Kinda reminds me she is human and not just this awesome, seemingly super human, can fix everything ever force. Groulnds her in my mind.

I'm glad you said this because I feel like some of these characters have become larger than life and that it's necessary to show how they've grown and become who they are.

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dance_the_dance November 5 2011, 22:08:20 UTC
“Yeah, Hannah,” he nods, grinning, pleased that at least one person bothers to notice or care about the existence of the most important thing in his life.
Awwwwww.

His hand settles over her wrist, thumb brushing against her skin in a long slow sweeping motion. His eyes are on her face, and it’s nothing forced, just him touching her, grounding her and bringing her back to the moment.
This is so beautiful, IDEK. ♥

Then she grins. “And I don’t hand out my number to any greenie on the street.”
:D WIN.

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rowofstars November 6 2011, 01:00:08 UTC
XD

Thank you, bb! They are too presh for the room really.

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