♥27 / [YuGiOh!] "Sight the King" 18.B/21

[killyoudead]

Sight the King - chapter 18.B
Summary: After Yuugi wakes up at the scene of a crime with blood on his hands and a voice in his head, there's only one thing he can do: Run.

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[killyoudead]

A: I don't really see a dominate Yuugi as being out of character - I mean, sure, he isn't particularly crass or anything but he IS a little perverted punk with a fetish for leather, and considering their outside-the-bedroom relationship, I can totally see Yuugi taking charge in the bedroom. Besides, it's very common for people to act one way "in real life" and be very radically different when sex is involved. ^_^ Dominant Yuugi for the win, though.

B: What made me slightly sad was that the "end of the first part", as you say, was actually supposed to be in the middle of this GIANT BLOCK OF TEXT, so it wouldn't have stood out nearly as much. Oh well. Foreshadowing! Dun dun dun...

C: ^_^ Confession time: the 'condom moment' was, actually, the first scene of this entire story that I thought of. That one scene was the thing I was writing for. I spent five months and 100,000 wprds trying to get to that ONE scene! Erm. I'm glad it played well. And no - even though they're "solid" in the heart's room, they're essentially just inside Yuugi's head. Unless one of them is bringing in syphilis as part of their self-identity, they have no worries.

D: >_> 'Makiu.' Not the best option, but. They improvised.

E: *remains quiet on the manner of the kidnapper[s? You don't know!]* Hahaha, I had heard that the last bit was a bit erotic, which was slightly unintentional. [But now that I think about it? Yeah. It totally is. You know, if it weren't for the whole 'I've been kidnapped! Crap!' part]

Real Life people.