♥13 / [YuGiOh!] "Sight the King" 06/21
Sight the King - chapter 6
Summary: After Yuugi wakes up at the scene of a crime with blood on his hands and a voice in his head, there's only one thing he can do: Run.
( in which there is an edge to the board )
Summary: After Yuugi wakes up at the scene of a crime with blood on his hands and a voice in his head, there's only one thing he can do: Run.
( in which there is an edge to the board )
And once again, wonderful descriptions of Titan. I do think you could've spent a little bit more time going in depth with the imagery, but what you have so far is good!
Finally, excellent transition from Shadow!Yami to Ghost!Yami. You managed to express poor Yuugi's shock well and realistically, while keeping with your motif of "insanity." Not only that, you're allowing for a realistic flow and growth in Yami and Yuugi's relationship. I greatly appreciate how you're taking your time with getting them together, rather than having them snog right off the bat!
I do have a couple questions, though. Will other characters show up? For example, who is currently owner of The Tower? Would that be a certain CEO? Will Yuugi run across a certain Thief, whilst strolling the streets of Titan? Because that would definitely be a matter of interest to me.
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