title: reasons why it had to be you
fandom: super junior m
pairing: zhou mi/kyuhyun
rating: PG-13
summary: kyuhyun doesn't know what it is about zhou mi, only that it had to be him.
notes: inspired by
this picture.
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He couldn't tell you what it was about Zhou Mi that drove Kyuhyun crazy, but he couldn't tell you his own name at the moment, lost in the heady rush of Zhou Mi's mouth and skin and hair and smile. )
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I noticed this is your first piece of fanfiction? And a QMi too! I'm so happy~ *cough*OTP*cough* I'll definitely keep an eye out for future writings from you. ;D
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"Some people call it foreplay," he said lightly. "Some people like it."
...<3
"I want you," he repeated back in Chinese, just for the thrill of Zhou Mi stilling under his hand
oh my god... ^-^
maybe it's because you're mine
maybe it's because I'm yours
this just sums it up perfectly.
you write really well, the way you weave words together is simply beautiful.
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i refuse to believe it. it was much to good to be a first fiction. your grammar is flawless as is the story itself. i will be watching out for more works from you.
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I loved it so much. It was sensual and endearing. Esp. the last two italic breaks because I love that they belong to each other in all ways. ♥
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