[01] reasons why it had to be you; qmi; pg-13

Sep 11, 2009 21:50

title: reasons why it had to be you
fandom: super junior m
pairing: zhou mi/kyuhyun
rating: PG-13
summary: kyuhyun doesn't know what it is about zhou mi, only that it had to be him.
notes: inspired by this picture.

He couldn't tell you what it was about Zhou Mi that drove Kyuhyun crazy, but he couldn't tell you his own name at the moment, lost in the heady rush of Zhou Mi's mouth and skin and hair and smile. )

p: zhou mi/kyuhyun, f: super junior

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cleverlilwill September 12 2009, 03:15:31 UTC
Wow, you've stolen my breath away. This was so beautifully written; I can feel the weight of every word. It has a nice flow to it too, very poetic.

I noticed this is your first piece of fanfiction? And a QMi too! I'm so happy~ *cough*OTP*cough* I'll definitely keep an eye out for future writings from you. ;D

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zhenli September 12 2009, 03:20:31 UTC
fantastic, really fantastic. the wording (frantically keyboardmashes)

"Some people call it foreplay," he said lightly. "Some people like it."
...<3

"I want you," he repeated back in Chinese, just for the thrill of Zhou Mi stilling under his hand
oh my god... ^-^

maybe it's because you're mine
maybe it's because I'm yours
this just sums it up perfectly.

you write really well, the way you weave words together is simply beautiful.

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zhenli September 12 2009, 03:23:23 UTC
noticed this is your first fiction.

i refuse to believe it. it was much to good to be a first fiction. your grammar is flawless as is the story itself. i will be watching out for more works from you.

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sheepieluv September 12 2009, 03:21:52 UTC
love.

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sheepieluv September 12 2009, 03:22:09 UTC
you broke my brain. I love this so much.

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coley_merrin September 12 2009, 03:29:22 UTC
*__* There's never enough of this pairing. And definitely never enough fics like this. <3 The way it flows is just really gorgeous... So very evocative. I think I have to go read it a few more times. <3

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mardigrasmaven September 12 2009, 03:43:01 UTC
I've fallen in love with this. It worked so well. I'm so glad that picture inspired you to write this sexy and beautiful QMi. MiMi makes quite the gorgeous muse indeed.

I loved it so much. It was sensual and endearing. Esp. the last two italic breaks because I love that they belong to each other in all ways. ♥

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