[19] work it 'til you're totally blown | R | qmi
title: work it 'til you're totally blown
fandom: super junior m
pairing: everyone/kyuhyun, zhou mi/kyuhyun
rating: R
summary: kyuhyun is hottest thing around these days, badass in a way no one who knew him five years ago could have predicted.
notes: new experimental style in tribute to the new sjm.
( boy is all grown up indeed, liquid hips moving to the beat as he conquers his body and makes it another weapon in his arsenal. sometimes siwon looks at him and can't remember the geeky, gawky boy he once knew. )
fandom: super junior m
pairing: everyone/kyuhyun, zhou mi/kyuhyun
rating: R
summary: kyuhyun is hottest thing around these days, badass in a way no one who knew him five years ago could have predicted.
notes: new experimental style in tribute to the new sjm.
( boy is all grown up indeed, liquid hips moving to the beat as he conquers his body and makes it another weapon in his arsenal. sometimes siwon looks at him and can't remember the geeky, gawky boy he once knew. )
my favourite parts are probably the hyukjae and sungmin bits, mainly because the description and imagery in the hyukjae bit blew me away: he licks his lips and stares at the dark of the ceiling and can't quite look kyuhyun in the eye in the morning, uncomfortable with the way kyuhyun's hair falls tousled over his forehead, the pink of his lips as he eats slices of oranges and sucks the juice from his fingers. - LIKE, HNNNGGHHH. and sungmin because... well i have a kyumin bias /shot. and the thought of sungmin jerking off to kyu is just al;sdkfhlsd.
the last part with mi is awesome too: but for now. kyuhyun slides his hand out from underneath his pajama pants and wipes them, carelessly, on the sheets. his head stays turned towards the figure that is zhou mi in the next bed. watches, teeth digging into his lower lip as zhou mi brings himself off into a shivery, panting mess. - OMG CRIES THIS IS JUST DELICIOUS.
i also really like the style of writing you use here - it's so suitable for short, sharp vignettes like these, using sentences that have a certain bite to them. amazing. ♥
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