Comments | heartcity: [05] like a paper airplane to your heart; qmi; g

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[05] like a paper airplane to your heart; qmi; g

Sep 28, 2009 14:46

title: like a paper airplane to your heart
fandom: super junior m
pairing: zhou mi/kyuhyun
rating: G
summary: kyuhyun's love letters are written in paper and sent by plane.

( The white paper sailed into the air with a swing of his arm, arcing above their heads to momentarily block out the sun. Then it moved on, across that blue sky like a determined little folded cloud, diving with a purpose into Zhou Mi's arm. )

p: zhou mi/kyuhyun, f: super junior

Comments 15

aprettyeternity September 28 2009, 22:05:33 UTC

teh fluff.
It kills so wondrously.
Anyway random nitpick: Zhou Mi giggled. "I can't believe you feel for that again." Sounds odd. ;DD

But that is a minor nitpick over the brightness and playful levity of this piece. 8D It makes me grin. ♥

heartcity September 28 2009, 22:09:21 UTC

fixed. thank you.

ddangkkoma September 28 2009, 23:07:59 UTC

aww, this was really pretty. the imagery was nice to go on and i liked how you had such kids playing behind all over them while they were played out to be caught up in nothing but each other

kiku_cha8_8 September 28 2009, 23:18:56 UTC

this is so cute ♥ Wonderful fic! You did a great job

Kyuhyun tackled him. "How are you this lame," he demanded breathlessly
lol, Zhoumi is that lame and cheesy and Kyu loves him for it *snickers*

reyinn September 29 2009, 00:30:33 UTC

that was SUPER ADORABLE! very worthy of the SUPER Junior M SUPER couple! >.<

volatileflame September 29 2009, 00:59:08 UTC

this was just too cute ♥