Comments | heartagramslash: The Memories

heartagramslash

The Memories

Mar 24, 2007 17:51

A/N; implicated themes
( under the stars and the moon and our memories... )

Comments 13

spiderweb_x March 24 2007, 11:59:11 UTC

Wow. Breathtaking images here! I especially like the way you had themes/motifs woven in (very skillfull). The tone was good - I'm not sure whether to call it resigned or regretful (both maybe?). And the way you interspersed the weather reports was really effective, too.
FC?

heartagramslash March 25 2007, 01:50:34 UTC

yes'm tis the fc
thanks for the feedback
i really enjoy hearing what people think of my work =)

midget666 March 24 2007, 12:11:51 UTC

This is beautiful! Great job! I loved it!

heartagramslash March 25 2007, 01:47:02 UTC

thank you my dear ♥

crimsonyght666 March 24 2007, 16:08:13 UTC

Lovely.
Wonderful job!

heartagramslash March 25 2007, 01:42:12 UTC

thankyou =)

003lastwords March 25 2007, 22:11:50 UTC

you are amazing.
end of story.

heartagramslash March 27 2007, 08:01:24 UTC

thank you sweetie
i appreciate it ♥

slasher48 June 15 2007, 15:53:59 UTC

This..was incredible...so beautiful..and extremely well written :)

heartagramslash June 16 2007, 01:56:08 UTC

thanks very much =)
im curious how you found your way here... i wrote this quite a while ago

slasher48 July 2 2007, 06:37:20 UTC

Well I've already read a lot of the most recent stuff so I'm kinda working my way back to the older stuff, which is just as good :)