Blind Leading the Blind -- Team Epilogue

Apr 10, 2008 07:49

Title: Blind Leading the Blind
Team: Epilogue
Author: nqdonne
Prompt: The Magician
Wordcount: 25,249
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: clubbing, drinking, frottage, toys, desk sex, accidental voyeurism
Summary: Harry catches wise to a series of blind items in the Daily Prophet's gossip pages that sound suspiciously like him. Except no one knows that he's gay, do ( Read more... )

nc-17, round i, prompt: the magician, fic, team epilogue

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biffes April 10 2008, 22:48:56 UTC
Fantastic! I love your Teddy. He's very mature in many aspects, but can be really hilarious (when he walks in on Harry) and downright funny. As for Harry, I suppose only he would have no background thoughts when asking "Is this seat taken?". He was SO spot on. I could list the things I liked in this fic endlessly, like the brilliant names you came up with (Whips and Giggles, Wizards and Wands). James calling the adults by their first names was funny, and the way he acted to impress the girl reminded me of his namesake.
The part where Harry ventured into the sexshop was ingenious... and he was again completely clueless. It was a real paradise (or playground) for him with the IPVs and other toys. And Draco choosing the Beaux Batons was so clever, he must have thought too much about Henri...
Thanks for showing Ginny in a positive light! Oh, and Albus and Scorpius were so nice together. Harry was a wonderful father in his own way (at least he tried).
And then the articles... I didn't expect them to be about Draco, that was a complete surprise. Perfect title, btw. The sex scenes were hot and smutty, both boys true to themselves.
Still I liked Harry's voice the most, his sloppiness, honest nature, and general kindness, his relationship with his own kids and Teddy and Scorpius.
And the last article was so great, I was really afraid you'll go for a H/G reconciliation. So happy end.
Wow. I really enjoyed the whole story.♥

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