Team EWE: 23. A snitch in time saves nine hours of Quidditch.

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Title: The Game of Time
Team: EWE
Author: allopen
Prompt: 23. A snitch in time saves nine hours of Quidditch.
Wordcount: 4,500
Rating: PG
Warnings: Minor Character death.
Summary: If he could only change ONE thing...
Author's Note: A snitch in time: An informer from a different time. Muggle saying - stitch in time saves nine: A little preventive

Comments

[smirking_muse]

Oh my, this was fabulous and gorgeous and just amazing! I had chills at the end. For serious (and I am sure that they are not just due to the fact that we've turned off the heat in our flat to save money). I loved the way it was confusing up until the end when it all came together beautifully. It was absolutely wonderful. I could not figure out who the professor was, but I knew it had to be someone critical- it was a wonderful mystery. And the flashforwards were just as confusing- I still couldn't piece them all together, but the way it came together in the end was just incredible! I loved the way you built their relationship- and I adored Harry's test. I like that they all discovered themselves and I was sad at Ginny's actions, but I could see how it would all be life altering- and it was the perfect event to trigger ruining a bunch of lives. I was so touched by the whole story... You have a truly amazing piece here (I've never read anything that gave me chills like that!). This is an incredible contribution to the contest and to our team! Extraordinarily well done!

[al_hazel]

Thank you!

I am so glad that you enjoyed the fic. It is kinda disjointed, and I am really glad that you completed reading it and liked it! :)