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Team Epilogue: 7.Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words with a wand can definitely harm me.

Apr 10, 2009 14:27

Title: Fate in His Hands
Team: Epilogue
Author: okydoky
Prompt: 7. Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words with a wand can definitely harm me.
Wordcount: 10,400
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: None.
Summary: Harry Potter disappeared two years ago in very mysterious circumstances. When Draco Malfoy finds him, he can't give up the opportunity to get one ( Read more... )

prompt: 7. sticks and stones, nc-17, fic, team epilogue, round ii

Comments 57

Fate in his hands ravenpan April 10 2009, 13:21:19 UTC

Oh I really loved this! the loss of memory, everythingbeing brought together -thedesperation. It was all so wonderful :)

Re: Fate in his hands okydoky April 12 2009, 19:56:37 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked how it all come together in the end :) ♥

sugareey April 10 2009, 14:57:18 UTC

Oh! That plot was very interesting! Nice work with this! I'm actually proud of Draco for doing the right thing, even though he knew it would hurt. Nice work!

okydoky April 12 2009, 19:57:39 UTC

Thank you! I think that kids would soften Draco slightly, so I'm so glad you thought it was believable that Draco did the right thing! ♥

smirking_muse April 10 2009, 15:59:05 UTC

Oh, wow. This was very interesting. I love that they were able to be together in the end. It was interesting how Harry's amnesia gave him the chance to have his own life, separate from what everyone expected and wanted from him- and how he was different given more options. I was afraid this was going to end sadly, and oh so happy when it didn't. I liked Pansy and Draco's characterisations- they were really fantastically well done. I'm also glad we saw that there was trouble in paradise in the beginning that made the end much more believable and understandable. Well done!

okydoky April 12 2009, 20:02:03 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm so glad you thought that the beginning correlated well with the ending, making it more believable! I was quite worried about how that came across, so that's so reassuring! Thanks so much for commenting! ♥

silverdragon87 April 10 2009, 17:09:03 UTC

Aww this was really great. At first I was afraid you were going to keep them apart, but we Team Epiloguers have been interestingly good at giving them at least somewhat happy endings!

YAY!

I liked it a lot.

okydoky April 12 2009, 20:07:00 UTC

Noooo, our boys deserve their happy endings, the journey to them is the fun bit :) I'm so glad you liked it! *hugs* ♥

nolagal April 10 2009, 21:55:42 UTC

woohoo! this is one of my favorites! I love the changes you made, especially the beginning. I am too tired to point out the good things but it's great. fabulous.

okydoky April 12 2009, 20:09:06 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you liked the changes! Thank you so much for all your help :) ♥