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ashindk September 6 2013, 20:49:46 UTC
That was brilliant! I love it so much!
Everything about it, really, but especially the way Harry and Draco just seem to work so well together right from the start, despite the awkwardness, and despite Draco still being quite reserved and not really willing to be friends with Harry.
And Kingsley! And mr. Bustamant and the other OCs. They seemed so real.
And Sirius. That poor man. My heart broke for him, when he was unable to kill Peter, even after everything. And then it broke all over again, when he was just standing there, in chock, and I wanted to scream at him to run and hide.
I can't wait for next week!

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khalulu September 6 2013, 21:18:01 UTC
This is so good! I'm hooked.

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birdsofshore September 6 2013, 21:28:54 UTC
LJ ate my lovingly crafted comment D: I must get some sleep, and I will write more in the morning, but this was superb. So enjoyed it all, thank you.

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*applauds* birdsofshore September 7 2013, 06:45:34 UTC
Well, the description of Sirius being beautiful and sad got to me. I am on a mission to feel more love for Sirius, and you are all helping a lot, so thanks for that ( ... )

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helenadax September 6 2013, 21:44:19 UTC
Awesome! I'm glad they were able to clear Sirius' name. And I loved the last scene; they make a great team!

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capitu September 6 2013, 21:55:22 UTC
Oh gosh, that was fantastic.

I love, I love Harry and Draco here. I love the writing and dialogue.

I loved the characters; Kingsley, Bustamant, Iris. God, I loved them all.

I loved the pace. I loved the introduction. That first conversation with Kingsley was all kinds of awesome. And Draco! I LOVE HIM. And I loved that this was from Harry's POV. I always so happy when I fall in love with a character through another character's eyes, you know? And of course, Harry. Man, you wrote him perfectly. Such an amazing characterisation, for all of them.

I've been so excited about this for ages, and I can assure you, amazing group of people creating this, you've exceeded all expectations I had by miles. Bravo for such an amazing first episode. I can't wait for the next!

Thank you, thank you!

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