Fic: One-Winged Angels

Sep 11, 2008 19:33

Author: _pinkchocolate
Title: One-Winged Angels
Pairing(s): Harry/Draco
Rating: NC-17
Summary: As punishment for his crimes during the war, Draco must live in an isolated cabin in the Forbidden Forest until he can rescue fifty unicorn foals.
Warnings (if any): Unicorns, some language, boy smexin’, and a questionable, non-cracky take on the prompt.
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cassie_black12 September 11 2008, 19:24:31 UTC
Really lovely story. Hot boys and cute baby unicorns - what more could anyone want ?!

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_pinkchocolate October 22 2008, 05:56:48 UTC
Thank you very much!

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acromantular September 11 2008, 20:13:07 UTC
Potter looked torn between horror and laughter. "I think that's Neville's," he said.

Oh god, I think this bit broke my brain.

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_pinkchocolate October 22 2008, 05:57:12 UTC
LOL. I didn't realise until after I sent the fic in how much brain-breaking potential that bit had.

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lotus_lizzy September 11 2008, 21:57:27 UTC
Very nice and interesting take on the prompt. The language was beautiful and the pacing just perfect.

Although, I wouldn't have been as forgiving as Draco after leaving me in a cabin without food for that long.

And just a question, did I miss it? How did the unicorn foal die?

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_pinkchocolate October 22 2008, 05:58:02 UTC
Thank you very much! Yeah, to be honest, I was really rushed by the end so I didn't have much time to deal with the abandonment thing. The foal was injured from the start; she just got worse the longer Draco kept her hidden away.

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lotus_lizzy October 22 2008, 06:46:59 UTC
Ah ok! Love your icon by the way! "Is this the talent portion of the debate?"

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okydoky September 11 2008, 22:26:17 UTC
I really enjoyed this fic, I loved the inclusion of unicorns in the plot. Quite original as well! Like I said very enjoyable fic ♥

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_pinkchocolate October 22 2008, 05:58:10 UTC
Thank you! :)

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exx_cecilegr September 11 2008, 22:48:15 UTC
This was amazing. I loved every minute of this -- the Wizengamot's strange and unique ruling, Draco's aloneness, the fact that he had to stay a virgin to collect the unicorns, Luna's unexpected appearances, Harry walking like a man on a mission! And there were fantastic visual descriptions that stayed with me until the end, like Draco kicking the chair aside and later kicking his shirt under someone's bed....

When the group of unicorn-collecting girls was introduced, I was a little nervous that the story would have a lot to do with all these original characters. I'm glad it didn't.

GREAT work. Thank you for writing and sharing!

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_pinkchocolate October 22 2008, 05:59:37 UTC
Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it :) Luna's appearances were honestly the hardest part to write -- I wanted to just write about Draco, but one of my betas warned me that it would get boring eventually, so I threw Luna in there.

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