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flamewarriorTitle: Cry For Me.
Pairing(s): Harry/Draco… shockingly.
Summary: Harry discovers that the old phrase, "If it ain't broke, don't fix it", really does hold true.
Rating: NC17
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No copyright infringement is intended.
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You know, there was a point somewhere roughly three quarters the way through that I started to feel kinda uncomfortable with Harry's "punishments" and I began to wonder if Harry had taken things too far over time and had really beat Draco into submission. But then you very cunningly brought to bare their relationship as it stood: a two way thing. You had me fooled so kudos to you!! I was completely sucked into thinking as Harry did when he started to doubt himself.
I love fics that can surprise me. Very clever of you!!
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I really liked this. I think both were very much in character - Draco may be submissive, but you can still see him being his normal Slytherin self by baiting Harry time and time again. And Harry, I think, was my favorite in this. I like how we get a glimpse of just how he ended up in this position and how much he really cares for Draco.
I think I have to agree with luthien82 - I really liked the picnic scene the best. It just really brought things full circle and showed just how much they love each other.
Great job!
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Sorry, just had to say that. I'm going to read it now.
So excited! ::bounces::
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