HAPPY H/D HOLIDAYS, BADCOOK!

Dec 22, 2012 23:14

Author: tryslora
Recipient: badcook
Title: Tuxedo Angel
Pairing(s): Harry/Draco with mentions of various canon pairings (Neville/Hannah, Luna/Rolf, Ron/Hermione)
Summary: Harry and Neville are looking for the infamous Dragon Lily, a Dark witch active throughout Europe and Asia. Instead, they find the Tuxedo Angel, a beautiful witch performing in Rome. Harry ( Read more... )

[long/chaptered fic], rated: nc-17, [fic], round: winter 2012

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pervyunitwins December 23 2012, 11:38:40 UTC
This story was absolutely amazing. I loved every bit of it. I still remember a time when I turned away from mpreg fics (heck I remember a time when I turned away from slash!), but not anymore. I really like to read a good mpreg fic now. And yours had a few unique twists that's made the reading of it a very good experience. First of all I have recently developed (or rather it was recently pointed out to me) that I have a kink to genderbenders. And that is what you provided so that made me happy. I know I was not the recipient, but at times I felt like it was a fic tailored for me likes. I think the premise of Draco being the Tuxedo Angle was brilliant (the name had be briefly thinking of Sailor Moon but you might not know who that is). I absolutely loved the plot! There were a few twists and turns and dark wizards and complicated plots to ruin the world. Plus the chemistry you created between Harry and Draco was oh so perfect. I loved the way you changed the point of views and how you included the letters into your story; thu fit so well and added an extra dimension when reading. I applaud you for using the first person perspective for Draco as I think that is difficult to do but also a good writing device. I liked the way you approached the mpreg aspect of the fic. The sex scenes were absolutely sizzling. I think my brain is malfunctioning now (it rather late here or rather early morning) so I might be coming across as rambling. But I really, really enjoyed your story and I just wanted to let you know.

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tryslora January 15 2013, 03:26:30 UTC
This was... an amazing first comment to receive, and made me grin so much. I'm so glad you enjoyed the fic, and that it felt tailored for you! I love playing with gender, and expectations and mpreg in fics, and this was a wonderful playground to explore those themes.

I'm so glad you liked the structure of the story... I played with a few ideas for how to make it come together, but I realized very quickly that both Draco and Harry needed to have their sides of the story told, and Neville added in the bits that neither of them thought to include! As well as helping move the action along. And please, ramble as much as you like. :) Your comment is lovely.

I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. Thank you!

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