HAPPY H/D HOLIDAYS, FOURTH_ROSE!

Dec 16, 2009 17:55

Author: moonlitdark
Recipient: fourth_rose
Title: With A Certain Charm
Pairing(s): Harry/Draco, Harry/OC
Summary: Draco is content with his life. He has a beautiful hotel to run and a new family to care for, but the arrival of an unexpected guest disturbs his orderly existence.
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the property of J.K. Rowling ( Read more... )

ewe, round: winter 2009, rated: nc-17, [fic]

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okydoky December 16 2009, 23:29:55 UTC
Ahhh I loved this.

The idea of Harry falling into running for Minister is really interesting, as was his er, ideas, about running for it! The relationship with Draco was lovely as well! :D And Draco running a hotel, and the staff being his family - great!

I loved the scene where Harry convinced Draco to trust him :P ;)

Great story! ♥

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moonlitdark February 7 2010, 18:59:29 UTC
Thank you so much! I’m very happy that you liked it! :)

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ashe_frost December 17 2009, 00:25:37 UTC
I love this entire story! It's amazing! Especially how long it took Harry and Draco to find that tentative trust and the discussion of work and politics and everything else. You really created a new world in this story and I am a huge fan of it. =) Great job.

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moonlitdark February 7 2010, 19:00:12 UTC
Thank you for this lovely comment! :)

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hitsuzen_hime December 17 2009, 05:15:17 UTC
All in all a wonderful story. However for the ending, I call bullsh*t, the notion that Harry could be confused as to the nature of their relationship when Draco had never EVER allowed himself to be topped, and then gave that to Harry, so Harry can come back with 'I thought it was just a fuck?' Umm.. no, you're just a twat.

When it comes right down to it, this Harry is a class A douche. Draco would have been better off with Darren and that's something I almost never say. He is fundamentally unworthy of Draco's trust, people who use people, particularly for that kind of shallow media ploys, never get a pass in my books.

Despite the fact that I think Harry deserves to be thrown out on his ass, brilliant plot and execution! Your story is beautiful and the Pear Tree Inn made me so very very happy. (Also really rather liked the idea of Narcissa letting Lucius rot in prison rather than wasting the family fortune getting him off scott free, that's something I don't think I've ever seen before and it was marvelous!)

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moonlitdark February 7 2010, 19:04:17 UTC
I’m glad you liked the Pear Tree Inn. Thank you for reading and commenting! :)

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snowy_owl_000 December 17 2009, 05:21:30 UTC
I liked this story even though this Harry is pretty thoughtless. The only thing I wondered about was why Draco didn't vote... But on the whole, very nice!! :)

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moonlitdark February 7 2010, 19:04:58 UTC
Heh, maybe Draco should’ve voted… umm, he was distracted? :D

Thank you for reading and commenting! :)

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ms_mindfunk December 17 2009, 16:07:05 UTC
Wonderful story! I've never seen Draco owning a hotel before, or Harry willingly immersing himself in politics. It's refreshing to see something different, especially when it's combined with a great plot. I like who Draco had become, and I get Harry being who he is. I'm a huge post-Hogwarts H/D fan, and this seemed like a believable progression of their characterizations, warts and all. I loved it. :)

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moonlitdark February 7 2010, 19:05:36 UTC
I’m pleased that this seemed believable. :) Thank you!

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