HAPPY H/D HOLIDAYS, SNIVELLYX!

[hd_hols]

Author: tray_la_la
Recipient: snivellyx
Title: Give Chase
Pairing(s): Harry/Draco
Summary: All Draco knows is that he can’t stop running.
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No copyright infringement is intended.
Warning(s): Light bondage, D/s, roughness
Epilogue compliant? EWE

Comments

[snivellyx]

GAH! You must have some kind of supernatural access to my thoughts because this was PERFECT! So much kinkiness, dominance, and one hot as fuck Harry! Draco's slightly frightened but totally horny personality had me shivering in my seat as I read. He is SUCH a dog, even when he's being topped.

And Harry, oh my Harry! Best, best, best part ever was when he kicked the door in! "Well, fuck" <-- My thoughts exactly! Along with *drool* *swoon* *tremble* and *squeal*

I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. I was convinced there was going to be some kind of drama concerning Gilliam and then I find out that no, Harry's only been lusting after Draco for years! HEAVEN! Don't feel embarrassed, Harry dear, none of us can resist him :D

Some of my favorite descriptions (I'm a sucker for vivid imagery):

A shadow eclipsed the mouth of the alley...
The instinct to flee, the sharp, heady panic of capture.
...and Potter had kissed him, open-mouthed and full of teeth...

I also loved all the ways you described Apparation! "Stepping into a twist" and "the air shifted with a crack."

And finally, the last bit at the end was excellent! It wrapped up the entire story into one neat little box with a pretty ribbon and my name on it! Thank you, thank you so much for this epic story! You're absolutely amazing! I'm off to read it again ^_^

[tray_la_la]

thank you so much for this amazingly fabulous comment! i am SO, SO happy you liked this!!! your sign up gave me so much room to play, and i'm thrilled it hit your buttons. :)

He is SUCH a dog, even when he's being topped.

lol! truer words were never said. *g*

*big hugs*

btw, i couldn't respond to your message because you have privacy settings up, but i just wanted to tell you it made my day!!!