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dragonfly_lilyRecipient:
cutecoatiTitle: Pureblood Deception
Pairing(s): Harry/Draco, Hermione/Ron
Summary: Harry attends a magic show with Ron and his family and discovers a magician who is more than he appears. With a dark force rising, illegal potions being used and people’s lives in the balance, will Harry be able to play the hero again?
Rating: PG-13
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Nice concept. I enjoyed the interaction between Ron and Dr Granger. And Rose was a treat. Sometimes I want to smack Ron for refusing to grow up about Malfoy (and other issues) but overall, he did see the light.
Oh - and I liked Draco just taking over Harry's kitchen and saving him from red wine with fowl.
Nice job.
C Dumbledore
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The only problem I had with this story was that 1 you never followed through on what happens with the group and what the threat to Draco, 2 some of the characters reactions were a bit two dimensional and felt a bit unrealistic. and I'm not just talking about the end.
Overall though, the idea was good and it'll be interesting if you continued it.
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I loved the way you played Ron's interaction with the Grangers - it rang a bit too true. ;)
This begs a continuation - the ending came up a bit fast after all that beautiful set-up, and I'm dying to know what comes of Greg and Pansy and the rest.
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