Beta needed! Please help!

[lys_stclaire]

I'm writing my first fic and really appreciate a beta reader eye to check my work. It's a Steve/OC and  I don't know how many chapters it will have yet.It's a romance/friendship/humor story and  it's M rated.
My biggest issues are in grammar because English is not my first language but suggestions to the story development are welcome too :)
Please help me!