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Some By Virtue Fall (Sheppard/Weir) [PG]

Jan 13, 2009 08:45

Title: Some By Virtue Fall
Author: havocthecat
Rating: PG
Warnings: Canon character death. Gosh, guess who?
Spoilers: General season three & four SGA.
Pairing: John Sheppard/Elizabeth Weir.
Beta: miera_c
Summary: The development of trust.

Author's Notes: This story is a backup for the 2008 swficathon, written for phrenitis, with the following prompt: "'tis one thing to be tempted, ( Read more... )

sheppard/weir ficathon, fanfic, fanfic atlantis, fanfic het

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havocthecat January 15 2009, 17:04:20 UTC

Aw, thank you! *glees*

momm2five January 13 2009, 16:23:02 UTC

*Flail*

Oh! Beautiful!

He's everything she tells herself she's not attracted to.
Love this line . . . it's so true. And that the attraction started when she read his file . . . I can see that, too! Love the end . . . just beautiful.

havocthecat January 15 2009, 17:08:52 UTC

Can't you see her getting intrigued when she doesn't want to be?

momm2five January 15 2009, 18:05:17 UTC

Oh completely! Because, seriously, when you look at Simon compared to John?? Yeah.

You know she thought he was cute right off, sitting in the chair all innocent, but then she read his file, felt that little tug because of his loyalty and *recklessness* and then when she actually got to know him?!? Ugh!

hariboo January 13 2009, 17:04:05 UTC

They smile. She doesn't know it's the beginning of the end.

Ouch. *hand to heart* The fic is lovely. Surprisingly I loved the last third section best, something about Lizzie sticking to Oberoth like that makes me happy.

havocthecat January 15 2009, 17:16:07 UTC

That line hurt to write, y'know? But, yeah, yanking out Ascension right as they're trying to off her? That was the best.

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havocthecat January 15 2009, 17:19:47 UTC

You're welcome. *hugs* I'm glad this works for you.

anuna_81 January 13 2009, 18:17:17 UTC

*dies*

I said I'd wait. I lied and I'm glad - that was so beautiful!!! ((hugs you))

havocthecat January 15 2009, 17:20:16 UTC

Hee! I posted more Sparky fic today too. *hugs* I'm glad this works for you. It's kind of bittersweet.

anuna_81 January 15 2009, 19:18:13 UTC

I read that one and I need a cultural translator. *g* But it's an awesome idea!

This definitely works for me. :) You rock!