Round 2: Checkpoint #1

Sep 01, 2010 01:32

So sorry about the lateness of the checkpoint and thank you to those who asked about it, RL has gotten hectic and things will be completely on track from now on ( Read more... )

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treeson September 1 2010, 08:41:48 UTC
Username: treeson
Characters/Pairings/Type: Dean/Winchester/Hermione
Current Word Count: 9k, give a few thousand since I haven't typed pages lately
What I Like About the Story: So far, it's a straight line. A to B with no stops in the middle.
What I Don’t Like About the Story: It's a straight line. *g* It caught my interest in the beginning, but it's not living up to my imagination. Plus, there's barely any emotion but angst and BAHBAHBAH. It also wants to be a Gabriel/Hermione, which is just insane because he comes in only after 7k and I have good Dean POV sections and, and, and.

It's just not interesting. Bbig things happen, HUGE, and yet it feels so freaking boring. Maybe I should bring forward some of those long-arc plots, or give it more short-arcs, distributing more climaxes throughout. Worth a shot. Zombies solve everything.

Anything Else: I'm studying day and night for my ACT, primarily math, so it's hard to 'switch' from math to the other side of the brain and Hermione's predicament. I'm trying to do a couple hundred words every day, but sometimes even that is out of reach. I assign more priority to math, but I think now that I've noticed that I'll divvy up my time and give it a set schedule.

Oh, I like working out my problems aloud (or into a textbox.)

<3 treeson

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