Harry & the Pirate I: Querida

Feb 26, 2005 01:20


Chapter 27 "Deleted Scene"
Querida: Chapter Two )

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jackfan2 February 26 2005, 21:20:41 UTC
LOL, she has named him Malvado! Poor Jack.

Oh, but this was really sweet! I love this girl; she and Jack are... reminds me of Don Juan DiMarco. Truly one of my favorite Johnny Depp movies and his role as Don Juan always reminded me of a young Jack Sparrow. Amazing, you and I... our thoughts run parallel more times than not. I'm just glad, utterly so, that your muse is working where mine is not.

Bravo! Beautifully done, mate On to chapter 3!

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geekmama February 26 2005, 21:33:41 UTC
LOL! My muse works overtime--there are so many things I should be doing, but none of them as entertaining as reading and writing pirate!smut.

Have you ever read any of tessabeth's Picaresque? That's were I get my model for YoungJack. But, yes, he would look something like Johnny did in Don Juan Demarco -- just longer hair, and more eye makeup. ;)

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hendercats March 21 2005, 05:14:14 UTC
The entire exchange where Juana is trying to find out more about Don Alejandro is delightful. Sweet of Jack to be so helpful, working hard to give her a meaningful description.

“Well, there you have it. God wanted her to be with him, to be one of his angels. You, on the other hand, demonstrably have much to learn before you are worthy.
*delighted laughter*

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geekmama March 21 2005, 05:57:00 UTC
I'm so happy to have made you laugh!

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