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How I Met Your Mother: Barney/Robin: "He Lied"

Sep 28, 2008 20:25

Title: He Lied
Fandom: How I Met Your Mother
Pairings: Barney/Robin
Rating: G
Warnings/Spoilers: Episode 4x01
Summary: Barney thinks about what he's done.
Notes: Written for tv_100 prompt lies. Not really satisfied with this... but I'll hopefully get around to writing a much better B/R fanfic.

( he lied................... )

how i met your mother: barney, how i met your mother: robin, how i met your mother, how i met your mother: barney/robin, -2008, -rated g

Comments 4

klutzy_girl September 29 2008, 00:27:29 UTC

Very good for your first try.

Poor Sad!Barney. I think that deep down, he's still screwed up from Shannon and that's affecting him now. He's insecure and thinks Robin won't like him for the way he is. I blame Shannon, probably like most Barney/Robin shippers.

flareonfury October 3 2008, 03:51:34 UTC

Thanks so much for the review!

I think he's insecure as well... and its probably because of Shannon.

jamie55 September 30 2008, 01:43:25 UTC

Good try, can see why you're dissatified with it though.

Also I think you spelled through wrong *through out the dinner not thought out the dinner*, right?

flareonfury October 3 2008, 03:52:42 UTC

Thanks so much for the review! And thanks, I fixed it.... I probably would have never noticed if you didn't say something - so thanks again! :)