Comments | harmony283: [Fic] Deathbed-confessionals & Oath

harmony283

[Fic] Deathbed-confessionals & Oath

Dec 12, 2009 15:34

EDIT: Okay call this a freakin' stroke Of AMAZING LUCK. but...okay I pushed 'preview' for my journal before I accidentally deleted it *what my previous post was about*....but...but...I never brought down the preview window. Never. I JUST NOW REALIZED THIS. OH MY GOD. *HEADDESK/SQUEE ( Read more... )

cross, speculation, heheheheheehhe, oath, happeh oh yes, mana, allen, lavi, deathbed-confessionals, 14th, spoilers

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pywen December 12 2009, 22:11:51 UTC

I have the distinct impression that Cross was speaking with his double in this fic. Though I,m glad that Cross got some feedback for once; it's good for him to know that he's not the highest man in the world.

I didn't expect the music to hurt either. Still, the fic was great. Thanks for writing it!

harmony283 December 12 2009, 22:31:22 UTC

*was afraid someone would comment on this before it was fixed*

Um please go back and re-read~ I found the original version of this that I was going to post, and you commented before I could edit it XD

pywen December 12 2009, 22:38:08 UTC

*blinks* err wait a sec. who tried to kill who here? *puzzled* 14th trying to kill someone,? Bookman trying? Cross trying?

harmony283 December 12 2009, 22:43:02 UTC

Bookman's either already dead at this point, or just not here. So no.
Why the heck would Cross try to kill ANYONE when he's the one who's already dying?
So who does that leave...? *go back and re-read, it might make sense*

did you re-read your request again? *like she asked*

pywen December 12 2009, 23:00:04 UTC

Yes I did. Thrice. And I still don't know who did it. Which is why I'm asking. You can blame the lack of comprehension on the neurone damage that my brain has right now; I'm not in the healthiest condition and still reads fics to pass the time. I pray that you may forgive my cluelessness in advance...

harmony283 December 12 2009, 23:11:54 UTC

I gave you the answer (indirectly) in my last post. Out of the three names you gave me.

I crossed out Cross (bad pun) and Bookman. Who does that leave out of the names you listed? XD

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leafyaki December 13 2009, 03:33:29 UTC

*wibbles*

*wibbles some more*

You wrote 'Deathbed Confessional' so well, dear. It's so very complex, I had to read it a few times before I even could begin to grasp at some of the things that were implied in there, and it's really quite wonderfully intricate.

I love the reference to how Allen slowly began to turn, with him humming and playing the piano and Lavi being bitter over it. Oh, Lavi. It really just brings out sharply how the war has twisted everything.

And when the 14th kissed Cross it's just, ugh, stab in the heart why dontcha ;__; In the end the 14th...tried to kill...Allen? D: And Allen is back, but Cross and the 14th are dying, together... *wibbles some more*

Oh, so much love for it.

'Oath' is really pretty awesome in a different way. How the 14th just goes "oh wow, Exorcist, cool, follow me" and just drags him off nonchalently. I adore adore ADORE the interaction between Mana and the 14th in this fic (actually, just give me Mana appearing substantially in any fic I'm a happy fangirl). How both brothers are so ( ... )