LET'S MACK (AND OTHER STUFF!)

[hariboo]

Comments

[redbrunja]

LBD, Lizzie/Darcy, he never stops looking at her like she's a car wreck, or the most beautiful thing he's ever seen.

[becca_radcgg]

staring right back at you, g

[anr]

Very nice! :)

[becca_radcgg]

*giant smiles* Thank you!

[fairytiger]

l o v e

[becca_radcgg]

t h a n k y o u ! :)

[allons_y42]

ohhh man, so freaking good. A+

[becca_radcgg]

*blushes* Thank you!

[blithers]

Oh man, just lovely. I love the first scene especially, when she realizes he wasn't typing the whole time. Perfect.

[becca_radcgg]

I loved the idea of that really being an afterthought. Like she's trying her hardest to just get through it, and she knows that he's looking but he's pretending the computer is a barrier between them like she was going to use her book and that makes everything okay... BUT WAIT... he wasn't actually using the computer at all! BOOM!

(sometimes my thoughts ramble on)

Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

[aamalie]

Oh noooo, my heart! I love the ending, with the turning of the tables, the reciprocation. Just, wow, this was lovely!!!

[becca_radcgg]

I'm so pleased that you liked it! :) Thank you for the comment.

[redbrunja]

EEEEEEEEEEEE.

Oh my lord, this was so freaking perfect. I absolutely adored the whole scene with the cereal and the whole build of this ficlet is perfect.

[becca_radcgg]

AWWWWWWWWwwwww! Thanks! :) When I read your prompt it was the first thing that came into mind to break it up into parts that were connected rather than dealing with the whole prompt line at once. It was originally going to be four sections, but I couldn't make the car accident thing work properly in my head.

Again, thank you for leaving such a lovely comment for me! *I know you can't see me, but my grin is huge right now*

[redbrunja]

Can you give me more details about the car accident that didn't make it into the final version?