OMG I was so hyped!!!! And then you KILLED ME. That was not an update THAT was a TEASER!!! Damn you for fucking with my mind. It can't handle this kind of hype then such a small dose of awesomeness! It breaks, I cry.
Anyway. The time jump is just a bit...um troublesome(?). I hope that there are not that many more? I'm unsure of how Gabriel is gonna play this next bit with Mo. I think he's gonna get away with it BUT then I thought that with the whole Zane thing in canon so I could be wrong. I hope I'm not but then it would be amusing to see what would happen should Mo reject Gabriel.
Thanks so much for commenting! :) I'm really sorry about the short chap and the cliffhanger (I'm evil that way), the next part should be ready to post soon. Also sorry that you found the time jump troublesome, I'm kind of playing this story by ear -- I don't have a detailed plot outline like I usually do -- so I'm not quite sure where it'll end up. There probably will be some more time jumps, though I'm not sure. Thanks again for commenting! :)
A third part...A THIRD PART!! HEEEEEE! I LOVE this story! (I say that about all your Mylar stories...and it's TRUE! But this one is like Strange Condition...it just sticks with me...I've actually borrowed from certain aspects of it in my own writing)
The idea of Gabriel killing someone's cat breaks my heart...but the fact that he'd do it because that person humiliated Mohinder and he is trying to protect his best friend is so...interesting...frighteningly creepy and tragic...but somehow very much the obsessive side of Gabriel...(if he did do it O.O)
Damn you and the way you leave me on the edge waiting for more and just dreaming about what the next chapter will bring...it's a blissful sort of torture...
Thank you so much!! I'm really happy you're liking it. Hee! And I'm so sorry about leaving you hanging like that -- I'm gonna' try and update weekly for a little while, hence the shorter chapter. <3 Thanks again, hon! :D
I really like the characterization you've developed for these guys! Mohinder is perfect, Gabriel is possessive yet brilliant, Eden = squee, Matt I can definitely see as a jock in high school... Awesome job and I can't wait for more! ^_^
Thanks so much!! I'm a little paranoid when it comes to characterization in this fic, so I'm happy you're liking it. I should have the next part posted soon. :)
TEASE! How can you give us that delicious teaser, then cut it at the comfrontation:P
Though I did like Momo defending Sylar, though he really shouldn't ask girls out in front of him. Might give Gabriel the impression that Momo isn't interested.lol
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Anyway. The time jump is just a bit...um troublesome(?). I hope that there are not that many more? I'm unsure of how Gabriel is gonna play this next bit with Mo. I think he's gonna get away with it BUT then I thought that with the whole Zane thing in canon so I could be wrong. I hope I'm not but then it would be amusing to see what would happen should Mo reject Gabriel.
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The idea of Gabriel killing someone's cat breaks my heart...but the fact that he'd do it because that person humiliated Mohinder and he is trying to protect his best friend is so...interesting...frighteningly creepy and tragic...but somehow very much the obsessive side of Gabriel...(if he did do it O.O)
Damn you and the way you leave me on the edge waiting for more and just dreaming about what the next chapter will bring...it's a blissful sort of torture...
cheers!!! <3
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ILU!
cheers! <3
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MOAR!!!
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How can you give us that delicious teaser, then cut it at the comfrontation:P
Though I did like Momo defending Sylar, though he really shouldn't ask girls out in front of him. Might give Gabriel the impression that Momo isn't interested.lol
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