Fic: "I Promise" Tony/Tim, Adult

Sep 27, 2009 20:16

Title: I Promise.
Pairing: Tony/Tim
Rating: Adult.
Length: ~5600
Disclaimer: I own nothing herein but the words, because human trafficking was illegal the last time I checked.
Warning(s): Post-Aliyah, set early summer. Sex/angst/some bad launguage.
Summary: DiNozzo and McGee come together again to deal with a loss they didn't understand.
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rating: adult, fic: ncis, pairing: tony/tim

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lilacs_roses September 28 2009, 06:29:36 UTC
I really, really enjoyed this piece of writing and look forward to seeing more from you.

This was just so ... tender and angsty...

Well done.

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harem_priestess September 28 2009, 18:52:11 UTC
Thank you. I'm a fan of the angsty, so much of what I write ends up like that. Not sure if that's a good thing or not!

Hopefully I'll have the where-with-all to do more.

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fraulein September 28 2009, 07:17:34 UTC
This broke my heart at the end. I really think you found just the right balance between your Tim being understanding and Tony being needy and their having an unspoken about connection all along. Also, Tim's response in the end about Gibbs killing them and Abby wanting to watch was not only right on target it was funny too. Hope you keep writing McGee - as there doesn't seem to be many stories out there about him!

Thanks for sharing.

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harem_priestess September 28 2009, 18:55:31 UTC
Thank you for reading. Suffice it say, I'm a massive McGee fan. And there is definitely a lack of McGee fic out there. And Tony/Tim is so easy to see AND write. At least for me. Now let's just see if I'm able to finish anything else.

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marie72 September 28 2009, 11:15:00 UTC
wow...

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harem_priestess September 28 2009, 18:56:20 UTC
Have to say, that's a reply I like :)

Thank you for reading.

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samueljames September 29 2009, 10:18:37 UTC
Wonderful emotion and sensuality between them.

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harem_priestess September 30 2009, 06:03:59 UTC
Thank you for reading. It got a little more emo than I had intended, which pretty much EVERYTHING I write does. :)

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amorphous_heart October 7 2009, 15:56:21 UTC
Amazing. So heartbreaking and beautiful. *mems*

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harem_priestess October 7 2009, 21:54:40 UTC
Thank you!

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