Comments | hardtime100: HT100 Challenge #47

callmeri in hardtime100

HT100 Challenge #47 - The Game: "Reverb"

Mar 22, 2004 18:43

Man, I’m out of practice. But wrestling is a game, right ( Read more... )

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Comments 5

tobyfan March 22 2004, 16:25:59 UTC

Good stuff. I always thought Toby had a bit of regret before it all ended.

lisacali March 23 2004, 10:26:21 UTC

Nice parallel! Very interesting to see Toby seeing himself, in a way.

rowanfairchild March 23 2004, 12:41:40 UTC

Well, if this is you 'out of practice', I'd say you don't have much to worry about. *g* Great moment to zoom in on. Well done, with lasting bite.

catheights March 24 2004, 13:26:24 UTC

I love the line about Andrew gaping up at Chris his eyes wide with surprise and something else. It makes you flashback to that look when Toby and Chris were wresting. Excellent drabble.

rileyc April 25 2004, 09:42:01 UTC

Good deja vu moment for Beech.