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HT100 Challenge #11 - One To Grow On

Jun 11, 2003 16:09

Hope this is okay, I'm reprinting challenge #4, to which this week's entry is a sequel. #4 ( Read more... )

ch 011 one to grow on, w: lisacali

Comments 14

hypertwink June 11 2003, 17:18:38 UTC

Oooh, there's that river in Egypt again. Bitter and angsty, mmmmm...just like my Starbucks coffee.

lisacali June 14 2003, 22:17:21 UTC

Yes *sigh* that's how I like them best.

alinewrites June 11 2003, 21:43:19 UTC

wonderful! Are you sure you don't want to expend this a little more? I'd love to see how this goes on!

lisacali June 14 2003, 22:19:19 UTC

Thanks, Aline. I would love to expand on this, but I just can't see doing a whole story around it. Maybe I'll do some more drabbles here and there.

actizera June 12 2003, 10:13:55 UTC

Aaaaack! You're killing me here! Poor Toby! This made me feel *so* awful and yet left me wanting more... How the hell do you *do* that? LOL This was FANTASTIC.

lisacali June 14 2003, 22:21:35 UTC

This made me feel *so* awful and yet left me wanting more...

It's the old 'hurts so good' syndrome. *g* Glad you liked it, or whatever. ;)

maverick4oz June 13 2003, 21:38:43 UTC

Ok, nothing should be this hot and this heartbreaking at the same time. Stop it Lisa, you're gonna give me whiplash. Waaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh!!

Amazingly painfully erotic. Great job. Thanks so much.

lisacali June 14 2003, 22:23:22 UTC

Oh, thank *you* Mav! It does my ego good to be called "painfully erotic". :)

snarkhunt June 14 2003, 00:25:42 UTC

Erg. I don't even know how to tell you how I feel about this drabble, Lisa. Heartbreakingly sad and bitter and painful and erotic. Fantastic work.

lisacali June 14 2003, 22:24:45 UTC

Wow, thanks, Eliza! I loved writing it, I'm so glad you enjoyed reading it.