Nov 05, 2006 21:55
This is a short poem that I wrote. I put it on my LJ but I thought I would put it here and see what yall thought. It doesnt go with any challenge or anything...i didnt know where else to put it. I hope you like it!!
Inner Thoughts
My day has not been the best
Filled with abusers, rapists and the rest
I long to see my other half
He always knows how to make me laugh
I love the way that his eyes always shine
Even if his day is as bad as mine
My life is complete now that I share his bed
His face is always in my head
We met each other late one night
When our eyes locked, it felt so right
My feelings of love have made me unsure
Some think what we have in unpure
I love this man with all my heart
If I didn’t have him, my life would fall apart
Sometimes he calls my cell
Just to say, “I Love You El”
Of him my heart has grown fond
“I Love You Too Toby,” I respond.
Please tell me what you think!!
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