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HT100 Challenge #53 - Fluffer: Meatloaf

May 06, 2004 04:09

I don't think this is quite what Maverick had in mind with this challenge...but since I'm down with a stomach virus, it's all I could think about...literally. I wrote this between trips to the bathroom...but after getting it all out of my system, I feel better. I hope it's easier on you than it was on me ( Read more... )

ch 053 fluffer, w: dustandroses

Comments 4

tobyfan May 6 2004, 06:04:13 UTC

LOL! This sounds more like Chett than Toby. Still, very cute. *g*

Yeah, well... dustandroses May 6 2004, 12:40:51 UTC

...have you ever had food poisoning? I've had it twice, and both times, I got just a bit delirous. That's kind of what I was trying to portray.

I guess it could sound like Chett...I had to look that one up; I've only seen one episode of Weird Science. Until recently, I didn't even know Lee T. was in the series! (For that matter, I didn't even know there was a series...I'm not really big on sitcoms!)

But I'm glad it made you laugh. That was what it was intended to do.

lisacali May 13 2004, 21:49:58 UTC

I love imagining them having light-hearted moments. (even in the throes of food-poisoning) Really enjoyed this one!

Hee hee... dustandroses May 14 2004, 04:10:44 UTC

Thanks...it made me giggle when I was sitting there moaning, so I decided I had to write it down.