I just can't stop. This one is such a weird one...an odd kind of prophecy given what became of my financial status and the mayhem that ensued about two years ago. (THAT's no fun! ) (It's better now.)
I thought this was going to be a song for one of the rock bands I used to work with, but nothing ever became of it...until now! This was kind of how I tried to write in those days, with a lot of internal rhymes. It rarely works 'cause you have to really start forcing the issue to make it hang together or else just it starts getting kind of barouque.