how's my driving?

[hardlygnostic]

So I'm admittedly constantly concerned about how I'm doing as Jade and so this is where you can tell me what I'm doing wrong! Because please please please, if I'm doing anything wrong at all, I'd like to be called out on it so I can do better!

Anon is on, IP logging is off, CAPTCHA is on because I hate spambots, and comments are screened!