Shira! Thnk you so much for the kind comment. Bya and Ulqui have some interesting similarities, and its always fun to play with that. Just as it's always fun to log w. Day's characters. Her Ulqui is fabulous. His subtlety and mannerisms are perfect~
From Greynaunch, aka YOUR MOM
anonymous
August 21 2008, 16:12:24 UTC
I'm intrigued by the beginning of the story where the two thugs are going to be staying at Byakuya's hotel.
Found one typo. There's one paragraph right after Byakuya gets off the phone with Ulki where the word "at" is repeated. You might want to correct that.
But where do I go to find out what happens next? And how do I get back to MY BOY Vergil and his V-wannabe bro - Dante? Eh, eh? Or am I too old or in too delicate a condition (NOT!) to read more?
Re: From Greynaunch, aka YOUR MOMgogo_ergo_sumAugust 21 2008, 16:24:34 UTC
MUM!! (lol. posted the comment for you, just like you wanted. and now, I get to respond.)
Firstly, thank you very much for reading this. It probably wasn't as thrilling as a log with YOUR BOY Vergil might be, but Ulqui (not Ulki!) are subdued kinda guys.
Speaking of... YOUR BOY, Vergil?? YOUR BOY? Isn't he just...everything? But you think he's YOUR BOY, huh? HMMM. Might have to arm wrestle you for him! ((is it weird or cute in a mom-daughter sorta way that we totally crush on the same fictional/anime character??))
Unfortunately, Dante and Vergil don't have any more logs together yet, but hopefully they will soon. Will send you some links to some other logs--with Vergil, of course!
As for the two thugs (the Yazuka) and what happens next... We're still writing it! Lots of logs relating to this arc should be wrapping up soon, so hopefully you'll enjoy where the story goes. <3
THNX, MOM. You totally rock. ((and yes, will fix that ONE TYPO.))
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Found one typo. There's one paragraph right after Byakuya gets off the phone with Ulki where the word "at" is repeated. You might want to correct that.
But where do I go to find out what happens next? And how do I get back to MY BOY Vergil and his V-wannabe bro - Dante? Eh, eh? Or am I too old or in too delicate a condition (NOT!) to read more?
I did enjoy this log. You are good! Love you, Mom
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Firstly, thank you very much for reading this. It probably wasn't as thrilling as a log with YOUR BOY Vergil might be, but Ulqui (not Ulki!) are subdued kinda guys.
Speaking of... YOUR BOY, Vergil?? YOUR BOY? Isn't he just...everything? But you think he's YOUR BOY, huh? HMMM. Might have to arm wrestle you for him! ((is it weird or cute in a mom-daughter sorta way that we totally crush on the same fictional/anime character??))
Unfortunately, Dante and Vergil don't have any more logs together yet, but hopefully they will soon. Will send you some links to some other logs--with Vergil, of course!
As for the two thugs (the Yazuka) and what happens next... We're still writing it! Lots of logs relating to this arc should be wrapping up soon, so hopefully you'll enjoy where the story goes. <3
THNX, MOM. You totally rock. ((and yes, will fix that ONE TYPO.))
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Thank you for taking the time to read this, and I'm so glad that you liked it!
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