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gemjam in hard4brains

Coda

Jan 20, 2008 19:33

Title: Coda
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Matt/John, slight Matt/Lucy
Summary: Matt tries to work out how his story ends.

( When the fire sale's over, Matt dates Lucy for a while, mostly because he's pretty sure that's how the story's supposed to end. Guy gets girl. Simple. Easy. Uncomplicated. )

fanfic

Comments 89

cetacea January 20 2008, 20:26:16 UTC

This was great! Very hot!

gemjam January 21 2008, 20:10:12 UTC

Thank you so much, I'm glad that you liked it. Thanks for reading :)

spikedluv January 20 2008, 21:09:06 UTC

That was fabulous! You really have their voices down. I love that Lucy sends Matt to John, and that Matt totally doesn't figure it out. And I love how Matt gets John. ♥ (And the smut, which was smokin' hot! *g*)

gemjam January 21 2008, 20:12:26 UTC

Thank you so much, I'm really happy that you think I can capture their voices effectively. I'm glad you liked Lucy's involvement too, and how clueless about it Matt was. Thanks for the kind words and thank you for reading :)

tarlanx January 20 2008, 21:11:29 UTC

Wonderful story...loved the pace of this one - and the Disney Band-Aids :-)

gemjam January 21 2008, 20:13:20 UTC

Thank you, I'm really glad that you thought the pacing worked here, and that you liked the detail of those Band-Aids ;) Thank you for reading :)

neichan22 January 20 2008, 22:37:42 UTC

What an interesting fic. I enjoyed it immensely. Hope there will be more soonest. nei

gemjam January 21 2008, 20:13:57 UTC

Thank you so much for the kind words, I'm very happy that you liked this. Thank you for reading :)

cold_poet January 20 2008, 23:55:53 UTC

This is fantastic. I love fic that leaves me grinning. Especially in conjunction with smokin' hot and dead on character voices. *G*

gemjam January 21 2008, 20:15:16 UTC

Thank you so much for such kind words, I'm really glad that this worked for you and you think I did a good job with the characters. That's very nice to hear. Thank you for reading :)