This is about all I'll probably be able to post today.

Feb 21, 2008 08:26

Title: six days into spring, is where our story begins 
Author: happywriter06
Fandom: Prison Break
Rating: PG-13 
Category: Het 
Characters: LJ Burrows/Sofia Lugo 
Summary: Sofia was so close, any closer and she would’ve been on my lap, which would’ve made for an even more awkward situation. 
Author's Notes: For chanchito_z's birthday celebration over at foxriver_ficwith the Read more... )

fic challenge, fandom fic: prison break

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happywriter06 February 21 2008, 19:18:20 UTC
I really like his voice in this one. At the beginning, I was totally like *did Simone forget the story LJ told Linc about his French tutor?* but I loved how you brought that back and revealed that he misled his dad about what happened there exactly--classic. Especially since Linc had such a blase attitude about it, unlike a real parent! *steps off the soap box*
I definitely didn't forget. I've always thought that he was talking about sex, just that he knows about girls. I mean there's a whole range of knowledge from knowing that girls exist (and they don't have cooties) to having sex.

Rewatching that scene so I could get the tutor's name right, I was reminded how Linc was so 'okay' with it. I get it but it was still kinda odd.

Anyway, I really like his thought process, totally believable, and I'm glad that Lincoln just took Sofia in, no hanky panky there. Very believable--to me it's just one more person he didn't want to see dead.
I'm glad it's believable. And that's my theory as far as Linc and Sofia and I'm sticking to it.

I also like how LJ's learned a lot of Spanish...it's a very nice touch to indicate how much time has gone by.
I can see him learning it to fit in and to get closer to Sofia.

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badboy_fangirl February 21 2008, 22:31:50 UTC
I mean there's a whole range of knowledge from knowing that girls exist (and they don't have cooties) to having sex.
This is true. Maybe I was just assuming too much; it really distressed me that he was only 13! Good grief.

I was reminded how Linc was so 'okay' with it. I get it but it was still kinda odd.
I never could decide if Linc was okay with it, or if he just didn't want to start a fight about something like that considering he and LJ had just been reunited, and they'd already had that fight in the car earlier. I tried to tell myself that was his intent, because it would bug me if he was okay about it. You know if he had a daughter he wouldn't have been okay about it.

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happywriter06 February 22 2008, 13:59:12 UTC
...it really distressed me that he was only 13!
Me, too! That's why I believe he was talking about just making out. I gotta believe it.

I tried to tell myself that was his intent, because it would bug me if he was okay about it. You know if he had a daughter he wouldn't have been okay about it.
That's makes sense. If it was his daughter, he'd been on his way back to Chicago to kill that kid.

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