and this is what you call het practice

[cynicalism]

you know, it'll be useful for something like je_whiteday. and yes folks, you're not free from advertisement even here. :Dv

that aside, this is actually a very belated (of course) birthday gift for crys, and she knows exactly why. i hope that thing about reading au's for me still applies. ♥♥♥

conversations among sanitary gentlemennakamaru/maki, massu,

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[xoxochic]

As if urinal aiming competitions wasn't gross enough, Massu comes up with that...Oh gross indeed. How did that even cross your mind lol.

"Uhm, it could be worse?" Masuda tries, and when Nakamaru stares him down hopefully, he adds, "She could've said something about your hair?"

HAHA typical Massu reply. Trying to oblige everyone's request while inadvertently making it worse XD

PRISSY BOY IS TEGOSHI WTH HAHAHA I SHOULD HAVE KNOWN.

"A girl like her--I wouldn't stand a chance. I bet she could have any guy she wanted."
Aww I think Maru stands as much chance as anyone else. He's so cute and down to earth really. And how cute Massu's way of comforting someone is by plying them with food.

"Service workers should take the service elevator," Tegoshi tilts his head to the side sweetly menacingly. "Right?"

"Oh, then shouldn't I--" Masuda says, stepping forward, but Tegoshi pulls him back in with a, "No you're fine," right before the elevator doors shut.

I know I should be concentrating on Maru instead but Tegomass always gets to me. No matter how much I may have to squint to see it =P

Ok I stopped copy pasting because I am too engrossed in reading the rest now....

and oh it wasn't her ring....

BUT HE STILL GOT THE DATE =DDDDD

"That's it?" Tegoshi snorts, wrinkling his nose suspiciously. "How anticlimactic."

LOL but hey it's Maru. This ending is more suitable for him than fanciful fairytale like ones. Which is why I like him a lot. So real and idk, ordinary? But his ordinariness stands out all the more among his flashy bandmates ^^ Ok what I want to say is that I like the simple way of how he got together with her. Simply by just asking =D

I like this story (au yet not like those weird ooc fics =D )and I'm amused at how you can practically pair Maki up with anyone and still make it work ^.^

[xoxochic]

Oh and I liked the style in this fic where the story itself unfolds along as Nakamaru is telling it and you don't know where one ends and the other begins until you're halfway into the line and you go 'oh, so its back to the present where Maru is re-telling the past events' oh I fail at expressing what I want to say...

I just like how it shifts back and forth effortlessly~

[cynicalism]

LOL. don't worry, my bias works like that too. otherwise why would tegoshi even be in this fic. LOLOL.

but i'm really glad you liked and that the ending came across well even if it wasn't her ring, because imo, nakamaru doesn't need a conventionality to get the girl. all he really needs to do is ask. ;)

and i'm glad the shifting storylines worked out well too. since it is conversations among sanitary gentlemen, i wanted everything to link back to, well, a conversation. XD

anyway thank you always for these lovely comments. ♥