lskdghasjdkflsdkjghdfjkdsgakfj!!!!!!! (it's here SCREAMS)
ok ok *calms down* i love the descriptions you have, especially at the end where he's bleeding. it's written in this way where the reader feels there but not there - in that dream-like state (which is perfect because this is a dream sldkagjldf) ALL THE TENSION TOO.
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ok ok *calms down*
i love the descriptions you have, especially at the end where he's bleeding. it's written in this way where the reader feels there but not there - in that dream-like state (which is perfect because this is a dream sldkagjldf)
ALL THE TENSION TOO.
/sobs at this and you, how do you write ;_____;
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dull? bb, this is anything but dull. this is intense and colorful and your use of words /rolls around/
like the comment above: THE TENSION. it drives me insane.
if this is just the prologue, i can't wait to see what you'll do with the rest.
you and your perfection /sobs ♥♥♥♥♥
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