when you gave me the beginning to look over, i was hooked. like seriously, hook-line-sinker hooked onto this. it's really raw, everything hyojung is feeling and thinking just strike you when you're reading. and then the end. S O B S. THAT LAST LINEEEEEEEEEE. i love how she has that strength to keep holding on and hoping for that one day that's going to be alright. it's so bittersweet. i cry ;___________;
hyorin is fascinating as a character and you are perfect as a writer ♥
thanks so much bb, I don't deserve so much praise from you /o\ it was hard for me to write this, not just because of her character but it hurt me to imagine what she thinks of herself u__u I'll keep working hard to improve each time!
I'm still not over the fact that you found this and took the time to comment despite how old this is ;; ♥ Thank you for reading! I really enjoy digging into her character :3
hyorin is so interesting and i really liked her characterization here. it felt like she came right off the screen. this is part of the industry is hard to write, but i think this piece handled the subject matter really well.
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S O B S. THAT LAST LINEEEEEEEEEE.
i love how she has that strength to keep holding on and hoping for that one day that's going to be alright. it's so bittersweet. i cry ;___________;
hyorin is fascinating as a character and you are perfect as a writer ♥
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thanks so much bb, I don't deserve so much praise from you /o\ it was hard for me to write this, not just because of her character but it hurt me to imagine what she thinks of herself u__u I'll keep working hard to improve each time!
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Thank you for reading! I really enjoy digging into her character :3
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And I adore this line most: one thing hyorin and hyojung have in common: they both want to be beautiful.
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That line is one of my favorites~ I'm very glad you enjoyed this ^^
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