Comments | hansbekhart: I See You Better In the Dark (Sam/Dean NC-17)

hansbekhart

I See You Better In the Dark (Sam/Dean NC-17)

Jan 29, 2007 23:59

Title: I See You Better In the Dark
Author: hansbekhart
Rating: NC-17
Summary: The first time is horrible, of course. Drunken fumbling. Have to be drunk for something like that, so they pick up some Wild Turkey and match shots until they stop thinking that this, this is something they can never, ever unknow. Never undo.
Notes: This is the third part of a ( Read more... )

supernatural, fanfiction

Comments 192

destina January 30 2007, 08:14:29 UTC

I love this just as much as I loved the first two, if not more. There's something about Dean going to sit in the car, after the first time, that just breaks me a little. Of course the sex was lovely, but the underlying tension and vivid emotion is even more so.

hansbekhart January 30 2007, 08:33:59 UTC

Gah, thank you so much. I was so, so nervous about this one, probably even more then the last one; they're all fairly different in tone, you know? But thank you so much - I really didn't want this to be a "happily ever after," because it isn't, so I'm glad that that comes across. Thank you!

winterweathered January 30 2007, 10:55:11 UTC

Yeah. The going to sit in the car thing was what wrecked me, too. I can't even explain how much I loved this series. I'm kind of sad it's over!

hansbekhart January 30 2007, 16:45:32 UTC

Ahhhh, don't say that, don't give me any more ideas. Silly thing was only supposed to be a one-shot anyway. But hah, thank you so much! I'm so glad that you enjoyed all of them!

shiverfree January 30 2007, 08:23:45 UTC

*falls over*

hansbekhart January 30 2007, 08:34:15 UTC

**attempts to revive** Thank you for reading!

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hansbekhart January 30 2007, 08:38:17 UTC

**jumps all over you**

You've been so encouraging to me during this project, and it's really meant so much to me - for real, dude, you made me feel so much better about writing this (I am clearly a loser because even when I like what's coming out on the page, I still get really nervous about it) and I really appreciated it. Thank you so much, sweetheart.

femmenerd January 30 2007, 10:29:01 UTC

Gah! You posted this while I was still staring blankly at a Word Doc with one paragraph to go on an essay. And I had to *hold back*. Totally worth it, dude.

I haven't read the first two, but this worked perfectly as a stand alone. I just, yeah, I love your details and how layered and subtle your Sam POV is--strong with a little bit of fragile in there too. It's just...fully believable. And so intimate as a result. Because they are them. AND NOBODY CALLED ANYBODY BABY. (Sorry, pet Wincest peeve. Uh, except when some people do it and it works. ANYWAY.)

hansbekhart January 30 2007, 16:49:36 UTC

Oh man, imagine the Winchesters calling each other baby. Yeah, that can kill a fic for me too. Unless it works, heh. But thank you so much! I have to admit, I was a little worried whether this part would stand on its own - the other two are pretty different in tone (and also different from each other), so it makes me happy to hear that that works for you. Thank you so much for reading, babe!

arabiana January 30 2007, 11:08:33 UTC

*flails* Holy Fuck it's posted! a;lkdj;fai wenmf;zksj
That is all I can manage at the moment. I have to go read this another three or four or possibly ten times to be able to leave accurate feedback. But just, oh God, at the beginning of the shower scene, with the sweetness and touching and then Dean putting his foot in his mouth and Sam just OH GOD I CAN NOT ARTICULATE! Will try again later!
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hansbekhart January 30 2007, 16:54:18 UTC

Ahahahaha, that's kind of how I felt too. Except it was more like asahgdfglfldaghfhga HOLY FUCK IT'S DONE FINALLY. But thank you so much!
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