Rat's Alley (FMA, Roy/Ed)

[hansbekhart]

Title: Rat's Alley
Author: hansbekhart
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Roy and Ed, in an alleyway. Sounds really meaningful, don't it?
Notes: shored gave me Gasoline, Kleptomania, Flashlight, and this is what my brain came up with: alleyway!porn. I think I got gasoline in there, in some abstract sort of way. Thanks as always to her for holding my hand and hammering

Comments

[anonymous]

First comment dance! This is HOT!!! Very odd, and definetely PWP, but oh so very hot. Two thumbs up
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[hansbekhart]

Thank you so much! Very glad that you enjoyed it. **joins you in the first comment dance**

[amelie_ami_chan]

Now that was hot!

[hansbekhart]

Ahaha, thanks so much!

[sushilady]

This was exactly what I was in the mood for. Wonderfully characterized as well as interesting. Not bad smut either ;p Now I have to go read those doujins. XD

[hansbekhart]

Oh man, it's a relief to hear that. We ripped a huge section of it out and rewrote it, so I'm really glad to hear that the characterization (and the porn, of course! ;) worked. Thanks for reading and commenting!

[priestess_grrrl]

wow, I really liked this! It's so raw and dark and hot. I really like how you had them lash out at each other, so harsh, yet so full of need and unbridled desire... really really hot. And the whole thing was so evocative... Up against a brick wall in the middle of a warzone, damn...! That's one place I've never had Ed and Roy do it. Wicked hot!

[hansbekhart]

Ahahaha, you know - the wall!sex thing occurred to me IMMEDIATELY when I decided to write Roy/Ed. It just seemed so natural, you know? Angry, warzone wall!sex. Eheh, anyway, glad you enjoyed it and thanks so much for commenting!

[peppermintwords]

Well-characterized and angsty. I liked it...it was very vivid.

[hansbekhart]

Thank you so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed it.