Damn, I actually posted something.

Mar 21, 2010 20:30

Title: The Turn Around
Characters/Pairings: Prussia, implied Prussia/France, implied Prussia/Hungary, implied Prussia/Austria
Rating: PG-13
Summary: "Point is, they needed to get rid of me, couldn’t stomach killing me, and couldn’t afford to let me talk. So they give me the crazy label. Cute, huh?"

Gilbert Weillschmidt looks healthier than in past sessions )

rating: pg-13, implied pairings, fic, hetalia, prussia

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agentak March 22 2010, 05:08:25 UTC
(^I was wondering the same thing... Edited because when I don't pay attention I can't spell 'wondering', apparently.)

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hangman_zeit March 22 2010, 21:05:36 UTC
Check the reply to Meggy.

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hangman_zeit March 22 2010, 21:04:52 UTC
I've got a feeling that's how most of my fics are gonna go over with you...

Thanks. I've got more shit I'm working on, I've just gotta work on not being a lazyass.

Neither. He's really Prussia. He went crazy post-WW2, says he still believes he's a nation, but really he's convinced himself he's human so the guilt's not as rough. He treats it like a well-plotted lie. Dunno if you caught who the doctor was in the footnote, but he's talking to France and doesn't recognize him. He got put in the hospital so he'd realize how fucking ludicrous it was to be called a human. 'Course I wasn't exactly fair with that cuz there's no way in hell someone could gather that from the fic, but whatevs :/

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faerichylde March 22 2010, 02:31:21 UTC
this was incredible. the idea is so original! i never even considered that they would do something like this to prussia.

you've got his character down perfectly, too.

and the end, the doctor: AMAZING.

thank you so much for writing this.

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hangman_zeit March 22 2010, 21:07:11 UTC
Thanks. This is my first Hetalia fic. It's cool to get a good reply back :) Sweet icon by the way.

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agentak March 22 2010, 05:05:57 UTC
That was... I mean... Hibba... Guh?

Once again I find myself lost in your brilliance. I loved the whole thing. So much.

"Instead of fucking and then becoming friends, we became friends and then fucked. That never ends well unless you’re planning on being exclusive, and exclusive ain’t exactly in our blood."

^Though this line upset me beyond words ;_;

But this was so freaking good.

....*goes back to re-read Prussia's "Trust" speech*

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hangman_zeit March 22 2010, 21:09:19 UTC
Thanks. These two are my OTP, but it ain't pretty.

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didgeridoodle March 22 2010, 16:53:23 UTC
Whoa. This is just brilliant! It's quite an original concept. The ending just left my mouth agape.

Prussia's written beautifully and endearingly in-character, too. I like the way you showed how he futilely proves the existence of Nations ... to someone who is actually one. Gah, the twist is marvelous!

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hangman_zeit March 22 2010, 21:11:06 UTC
Thanks. Questionably crazy Prussia is a guilty pleasure of mine.

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poke_maniac March 27 2010, 20:18:26 UTC
Wow! This is such a great idea! You pulled it off really well and that twist at the end was just mind-exploding. Great job

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