Stage 4, Volume 9 Translations (July 24)
(FEDER)
Sorry it took so long! My parents were visiting me until just recently, and I went on hiatus from the internet during their stay. Next chapter will be finished more on time, I promise.
Anyway, quite an interesting chapter! Risa shows some fight, and Satoshi even gets some screen time, though no Krad. ;-;
Hope you enjoy the read and comments are, of course, welcome!
color page: Everything in the world is made up of paired fakes.
Page 4
Daisuke: So then...
-Harada-san has Riku-san's appearance?
So she's the real Harada-sana
Page 5
Daisuke: Why did even Harada-san come to this world?
-she's not caught up in our state of affairs at all.
Dark: That's why
-I said that I didn't need this piece of art!!
-It's a pain----!!
Daisuke: Come to mention it
Dark: In short!
You and Risa were
-pulled into Insomnia's World together!!
Page 6
Dark: I don't know how he chooses who to bring
But anyway!!
(picture of Hiwatari with "Hiwatari" posted over his face)
-I came back so I could bring you back.
-And to do that, I had to do this and that out there.
Risa: This and that?
Dark: That's right!
-And Hiwatari and I had to take each other's hand and work together
Hiwatari: Sounds fun.
Dark: What!!
-All of my pores went through a shocking transcendence
-And it expanded throughout my body as a hazy chill.
page 7
Daisuke: Oh? I'm sorry about your pores?
And that you had to work together?
Dark: Never mind that; just forget about it. Just don't do this again.
Daisuke: Okay, Riku-san isn't here. ....so does that mean
-She's safe?
Dark: I guess.
Daisuke: That's great!
Dark: Yeah, great.
Daisuke: Dark, how do we go back over there?
-We have to save Harada-san!
Page 8
Dark: You have to get Riku
-without letting Insomnia, or Rokuto, find out.
-If you're gonna do that,
-then you have to follow the white feather
page 9
Dark: After that,
-You should be able to see
-the white door that Hiwatari made.
-You should jump in there.
-There will be some interference; we can't do anything about that.
-So I'll somehow take care of it, because
-I'm on loan. (er....ok?)
page 10
Rokuto: Riku-san
-You're dancing with me like this,
-so that means you've chosen me, right?
page 11
Rokuto: That I,
-more than Daisuke
"Riku" (Risa): I wonder.
-Rokuto, do you
-really like me?
page 12
Rokuto: ...what?
-Y...yeah.
"Riku" (Risa): How much?
Rokuto: H...how much?
"Riku" (Risa): You know, I
-I*
page 13
"Riku" (Risa): I
-actually like Niwa-kun.
-got it?
(T/N: The first I she used was "watashi", which is a general I and more like something Riku would use. The next I is "atashi", which is more feminine. By changing pronouns Risa is signaling that she's done playing Riku and is ready to reveal her true self)
-Geez, it figures
-You didn't notice it at all.
-I'm Risa!!
page 14
Risa: You didn't realize that we switched.
We changed outside so there would be no noticeable evidence.
-But I don't like this.
-Riku is my older twin sister. And you selfishly tried to get her caught up in all of t his...
-There's no way I can forgive you!!
Daisuke: [Thoughts] He's found out!!
-Harada-san!!
page 15
Daisuke: Harada-san!!
Dark: Wait up! Daisuke!
-Oh geez
aside: what a pain
-Wizu, come--------
page 16
Rokuto: As I thought,
-You're an interference.
-You said that I made you have a bad feeling,
so I drew you in.
-You wouldn't be able to leave this world a second time
-until I'm fed up with hearing about it.
-I've always, always, always
-keep hearing how ominous I am.
page 17
Rokuto:
-There's nothing I desire
-I just have one question.
-Why? Why have people decided that I am ominous?
-My wish is to
-hear that from everyone
-Becoming my
-one part
page 18
Risa: You're wrong.
-I didn't say you were creepy.
-Just that
-you were scary---...!
page 19
Daisuke: Harada-san!!
-Harada-san, over here!!
Risa: Are you the real Daisuke!?
Daisuke: Yeah!
Dark: Is this okay, Risa?
Risa: Dark-san!? Like I thought, you came to rescue me!!
Daisuke: Harada-san, you know?
page 20
Risa: Hey!?
Why is Niwa-kun with Dark-san here!?
Daisuke: We'll talk about that later. Let's hurry up and get out of here for now!!
Risa: Run away and go where!?
Where should we go!?
Daisuke: We follow that white feather.
Risa: White feather!?
Daisuke: That white feather will
-tell us the way to go!!
page 21
Daisuke: Wait!!
page 22
Daisuke: Harada-san!!
Riku: Niwa-kun, are you okay--
Daisuke: Yeah,
-I'm okay...
Risa: Niwa-kun?
page 23
Daisuke: There's a door
-here---...!
fake Dark: You've come this far. I won't let you escape....
Only a little more, and I would have been able to become you..
-That door
page 24
fake Dark: It won't open from this side.
Dark: I don't know
-about that.
Daisuke: Dark!!
page 25
Dark: Leave this to me! You take care of Risa!
Daisuke: Right!
Riku: Dark-san!!
Daisuke: Harada-san!!
fake Dark: Why!!
-do you interfere with me!?
-I don't understand.
page 26
fake dark: You should be close to me
-Black Wings!!
page 27
Daisuke:You won't breath
-that name
-from that mouth of yours
Rokuto: Just a little more...
-...Just a little more
and I would have been able...
-to switch places with Daisuke....
-He was supposed to be my object!!
page 28
Dark: You had bad taste and such a wild delusion.
-Unfortunately for you,
-That guy (Daisuke) is mine.
page 29
Dark: After all, a bust is a bust.
-You can't become the real thing.
-You won't become him by mimicking him
-or me neither.
-You can never
-become me.
-Never.
page 30
Dark: What you can see from your side
-is only the world that you have seen.
-You did the reverse
-After all,
-A shadow graph
-is just a shadow graph.
page 31
Rokuto: Knock it off...!!
-I...
-I'm real!
-In this world....
-I'm a real thing!!
page 32
Satsohi: -----This is because
-I can't stand seeing an unfinished piece of work.
-It's an eyesore.
page 33
Daisuke: The white...
-light is...!
page 34
Daisuke: Hiwatari-kun!!
-Help us
page 35
Riku: Hiwatari-kun---!!
-Step aside---!!
finish: What will Daisuke-tachi, who escaped from Insomnia, do...?
Sorry it took so long! My parents were visiting me until just recently, and I went on hiatus from the internet during their stay. Next chapter will be finished more on time, I promise.
Anyway, quite an interesting chapter! Risa shows some fight, and Satoshi even gets some screen time, though no Krad. ;-;
Hope you enjoy the read and comments are, of course, welcome!
color page: Everything in the world is made up of paired fakes.
Page 4
Daisuke: So then...
-Harada-san has Riku-san's appearance?
So she's the real Harada-sana
Page 5
Daisuke: Why did even Harada-san come to this world?
-she's not caught up in our state of affairs at all.
Dark: That's why
-I said that I didn't need this piece of art!!
-It's a pain----!!
Daisuke: Come to mention it
Dark: In short!
You and Risa were
-pulled into Insomnia's World together!!
Page 6
Dark: I don't know how he chooses who to bring
But anyway!!
(picture of Hiwatari with "Hiwatari" posted over his face)
-I came back so I could bring you back.
-And to do that, I had to do this and that out there.
Risa: This and that?
Dark: That's right!
-And Hiwatari and I had to take each other's hand and work together
Hiwatari: Sounds fun.
Dark: What!!
-All of my pores went through a shocking transcendence
-And it expanded throughout my body as a hazy chill.
page 7
Daisuke: Oh? I'm sorry about your pores?
And that you had to work together?
Dark: Never mind that; just forget about it. Just don't do this again.
Daisuke: Okay, Riku-san isn't here. ....so does that mean
-She's safe?
Dark: I guess.
Daisuke: That's great!
Dark: Yeah, great.
Daisuke: Dark, how do we go back over there?
-We have to save Harada-san!
Page 8
Dark: You have to get Riku
-without letting Insomnia, or Rokuto, find out.
-If you're gonna do that,
-then you have to follow the white feather
page 9
Dark: After that,
-You should be able to see
-the white door that Hiwatari made.
-You should jump in there.
-There will be some interference; we can't do anything about that.
-So I'll somehow take care of it, because
-I'm on loan. (er....ok?)
page 10
Rokuto: Riku-san
-You're dancing with me like this,
-so that means you've chosen me, right?
page 11
Rokuto: That I,
-more than Daisuke
"Riku" (Risa): I wonder.
-Rokuto, do you
-really like me?
page 12
Rokuto: ...what?
-Y...yeah.
"Riku" (Risa): How much?
Rokuto: H...how much?
"Riku" (Risa): You know, I
-I*
page 13
"Riku" (Risa): I
-actually like Niwa-kun.
-got it?
(T/N: The first I she used was "watashi", which is a general I and more like something Riku would use. The next I is "atashi", which is more feminine. By changing pronouns Risa is signaling that she's done playing Riku and is ready to reveal her true self)
-Geez, it figures
-You didn't notice it at all.
-I'm Risa!!
page 14
Risa: You didn't realize that we switched.
We changed outside so there would be no noticeable evidence.
-But I don't like this.
-Riku is my older twin sister. And you selfishly tried to get her caught up in all of t his...
-There's no way I can forgive you!!
Daisuke: [Thoughts] He's found out!!
-Harada-san!!
page 15
Daisuke: Harada-san!!
Dark: Wait up! Daisuke!
-Oh geez
aside: what a pain
-Wizu, come--------
page 16
Rokuto: As I thought,
-You're an interference.
-You said that I made you have a bad feeling,
so I drew you in.
-You wouldn't be able to leave this world a second time
-until I'm fed up with hearing about it.
-I've always, always, always
-keep hearing how ominous I am.
page 17
Rokuto:
-There's nothing I desire
-I just have one question.
-Why? Why have people decided that I am ominous?
-My wish is to
-hear that from everyone
-Becoming my
-one part
page 18
Risa: You're wrong.
-I didn't say you were creepy.
-Just that
-you were scary---...!
page 19
Daisuke: Harada-san!!
-Harada-san, over here!!
Risa: Are you the real Daisuke!?
Daisuke: Yeah!
Dark: Is this okay, Risa?
Risa: Dark-san!? Like I thought, you came to rescue me!!
Daisuke: Harada-san, you know?
page 20
Risa: Hey!?
Why is Niwa-kun with Dark-san here!?
Daisuke: We'll talk about that later. Let's hurry up and get out of here for now!!
Risa: Run away and go where!?
Where should we go!?
Daisuke: We follow that white feather.
Risa: White feather!?
Daisuke: That white feather will
-tell us the way to go!!
page 21
Daisuke: Wait!!
page 22
Daisuke: Harada-san!!
Riku: Niwa-kun, are you okay--
Daisuke: Yeah,
-I'm okay...
Risa: Niwa-kun?
page 23
Daisuke: There's a door
-here---...!
fake Dark: You've come this far. I won't let you escape....
Only a little more, and I would have been able to become you..
-That door
page 24
fake Dark: It won't open from this side.
Dark: I don't know
-about that.
Daisuke: Dark!!
page 25
Dark: Leave this to me! You take care of Risa!
Daisuke: Right!
Riku: Dark-san!!
Daisuke: Harada-san!!
fake Dark: Why!!
-do you interfere with me!?
-I don't understand.
page 26
fake dark: You should be close to me
-Black Wings!!
page 27
Daisuke:You won't breath
-that name
-from that mouth of yours
Rokuto: Just a little more...
-...Just a little more
and I would have been able...
-to switch places with Daisuke....
-He was supposed to be my object!!
page 28
Dark: You had bad taste and such a wild delusion.
-Unfortunately for you,
-That guy (Daisuke) is mine.
page 29
Dark: After all, a bust is a bust.
-You can't become the real thing.
-You won't become him by mimicking him
-or me neither.
-You can never
-become me.
-Never.
page 30
Dark: What you can see from your side
-is only the world that you have seen.
-You did the reverse
-After all,
-A shadow graph
-is just a shadow graph.
page 31
Rokuto: Knock it off...!!
-I...
-I'm real!
-In this world....
-I'm a real thing!!
page 32
Satsohi: -----This is because
-I can't stand seeing an unfinished piece of work.
-It's an eyesore.
page 33
Daisuke: The white...
-light is...!
page 34
Daisuke: Hiwatari-kun!!
-Help us
page 35
Riku: Hiwatari-kun---!!
-Step aside---!!
finish: What will Daisuke-tachi, who escaped from Insomnia, do...?