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awkwardnormalcy in hanayoridango

Cooking School Part Two! Finally xD

Oct 27, 2009 23:33

Sorry this is shorter than the last one! The next will be longer, promise <3

I gotta be honest with you. This is not planned out, the question of the pairing is between RuiYuki and Akirayuki. This is the first HYD fic I’ve written and certainly one of the more unusual pairings I’ve written. Remember I’m always up for constructive crics! It helps me ( Read more... )

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tepaj October 29 2009, 05:27:00 UTC

sorry for the long delay in leaving a comment. i had read it already but got distracted and hadn't been able to get back to leaving a comment til now.

even though it is short, i like that you went into some explanation of yuki being around the f3s. in my opinion, certainly it did begin because she is "makino's friend", as a way to get info on makino to help domyouji. however i think yuki stood out because she wasn't willing to sell out her best friends happiness for anything, not even for the charming f3s. over time, she had made her own special place among them.

ok, so now i wonder who was that person who took a picture of her while is is supposed in the bath! so scandalous!!! (lol) i know you said you aren't sure if it will be a ruiyuki or an akirayuki. for me it seems more like an akirayuki but it will be interesting to see which one you decide to go with on this one.

awkwardnormalcy February 15 2010, 23:24:20 UTC

Thank you so much for the comment <3 I went back and read these comments and felt compelled to finally finish the next part! it's finally up, so you'll know the answer to that question~

Thank you, I'm glad that yo ulike my interpertation of how that happened--I was worried it didn't go very smoothly

aida_blue November 3 2009, 07:35:05 UTC

Even though it was smaller in lenght than the other chapter and I longed for more I must recognize that the chappy was utterly sweet. LOL Almighty Weed Operation, that was funny. But most of all I loved how you went back in time and explained how she became so close with Akira. Yuki has gained a status for harself next to the F4 and that is really nice. I wonder now who was the one that who broke her chain of thoughts.

Great chappy, hope you'll give us another one pretty soon.

awkwardnormalcy February 15 2010, 23:24:56 UTC

Thank you~ and I finally posted another chapter.

Thanks, I feared that I made her inclusion to fake or sudden.

aida_blue November 3 2009, 07:37:13 UTC

P.S. Thank you for the nice comment on My Angel, I am glad you like it. :)