New fic: Right Round

[hanakage]

It. Is. DONE. (Finally!)

A few things:

I started this weeks ago, when I was still giddy from the start of summer, and had the hope of posting it in time for my one-year anniversary at FFdotnet. But, alas, my computer died, and I sort of lost my stride.

This was supposed to be purely humor--basically, this was an outlet for me to mess with Sasuke and

Comments

[helreginn]

Atrocious? Atrocious, you say? This is the farthest thing from atrocious I have seen in Naruto's fandom recently. >.>;;; (Given that I've been reading some really well-written stuff, but in another fandom, but this was enough to bring me back to Naruto~!)

It's so funny! (I remember a certain yaoi manga wherein the uke was an editor for Boy's Love manga publisher, and put 16 exclamation marks for a certain scene, and I think he had the right idea for I want to add them there instead of one. XD)

Your humor, now that I read it, I realize how much I missed it. >.> (I say that every single time you post, don't I? Or something to that effect. XD)

The descriptions, Sasuke's voice, Oto's manager who was never explicitly mentioned, but I can tell that it was Orochimaru (I liked how you went about it, describing him with his peculiarities rather than appearance. Of course, there's no other pedo like him.), and Kakashi. At first I wondered if it was Jiraiya, but then it didn't seem like him--much. And even if he wasn't here much, he seemed IC. XDD

Now, for the rest of the story, I'd say it was short, sweet, without any unnecessary information, hilariously cute, and awesome. (Plus other superlatives, add according to your discretion.)

I have several favourite lines, especially the ones where Sasuke is making an idiot of himself, but honestly, it's hard to pick them out. I just want to quote the entire thing!

Guuuuh...I'd go with: Oto Employee turned and, with a smile that lit up his whole face (and the whole store, and, quite possibly, the most far-flung corners of the universe) issued the standard Hello-how-are-you? because I thoroughly approve of the Naruto-love~

In short (which I never am...), I love, love, loved it. Thank you, I had almost lost faith in Naruto fanfiction. ♥♥♥

[hanakage]

*BLUSH*

...That's all I can say, really. I'm not worthyyyyy!

<3

[helreginn]

*BEAMS*

You're so worthy. Or rather, you're not worthy of this crappy comment. >.<; I'm only rambling after all. XD

♥

LOL Naruto icon. I need one too. Naruto icon, that is. >.>;

[hanakage]

I'm going to add it to FFdotnet today, in "honor" of Saucecakes' birthday. XD

There's a Naruto icon for every possible feeling/expression, I think. XD

p.s. Gokuderaaaa... <3 I need to finish the manga so I can read GokuTsuna ficcage...

[helreginn]

GOFORIT! Sasuke needs that. >.>;

I know. *sigh* I love Naruto, but I'm sorely lacking in Naruto icons. X and TB and Clamp have taken over my brainz and are producing evil zombies!

*goes back to worshipping Clamp*