Past Tense

[hamsterhen89]

 Title: Past Tense

Pairing: Xanseop (Xander/Kiseop)

Summary: Who wants to get married when you can have a hot, foreign fortuneteller?

Rating: PG

Warning: AU, female Kevin. Cameo by Heechul

Notes: I should really make a move on the prompt challenge. But anyways, better late than never! ZOMG, this turned out longer than I expected 0___0

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Kiseop can feel

Comments

[anca_chan]

This was definitely interesting and... different. XD I can portray Xander as a fortuneteller, surprisingly. Even though everything happened a bit too fast (i.e. they start making out a minute after they meet, which was sort of weird), I liked the whole concept. And I also found that I can see Kiseop with mostly anybody when it comes to fanfics, dunno why. He just seems so approachable in writing, from no matter what point of view/environment you try to develop him.

[hamsterhen89]

thank you :) hahaha a good kind of diffferent i hope :D thank you for your nice, long comment and opinion <3

[volatileflame]

i kinda agree with the previous comment ~ a little too fast, but an intriguing story nonetheless : )

died at this line though: “You better not hurt him again Lee Kiseop or I’ll castrate you with a spoon!” ~ i've used this exact threat a few times myself XD

[hamsterhen89]

thank you <3 hahaha, oh... yeah i kinda thought so too? but it seems to fit because xander's been waiting a long time

[s2_otter]

KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA,
MUAHAHAHAHA.
I'm just happy Kevin Karin ran away with Kibum. How fitting :D
And there's 2SHIN!
Xander, Eli and Kiseop are the three I'm free with whatever pairings you put them in, so YAY! MUAHAHA.

I sort of disagree with the previous 2. After all, Xander's been expecting this, yeah? :D Since they'll end up together anyway, forget the slowness XD!
Fast and furious! XDD!
I think I went crazy.

I like the end~ "Me love you long time", sort of wraps up the whole thing ^^
KYAAAAAAA THEY RAN AWAYYYY, HOW CUTE!

[hamsterhen89]

hahahaha oh, you caught that expecting part :D yes, there's 2shin and Kevbum <3 <3 thank you for your lovely comment <3 <3 i'm glad you liked this !

[gogothgirl]

I expected the story to end after that delightful image of Xander bent over a table, but nooooooo..you surprised me with the awesomely funny but kind of sad plot twist XD a broken down xander is hard to find now, so thanks for putting him here :) he's my bias, so as per tradition I do so enjoy picking on him.

I love love love love this :D

[hamsterhen89]

LOL sorry?? you're welcome :D oh! we share the same bias :D :D :D ahahaha, pick on the biases you love <3 thank you!