Philander [Chapter 9]

Sep 06, 2010 11:52

Author: Ani
Genre:  AU, romance
Rating: PG
Pairing: Chiitaro, Inoodai, Okajima, Takayama
Word Count: 1810
Summary: In which Ryutaro is working as a host and Chinen's sister winds up with an unfair debt.
Disclaimer: I don't own JE

The Plan )

fanfiction: multi-chapter, arioka daiki, series: philander, p: inoodai, morimoto ryutaro, chinen yuuri, nakajima yuuto, p: chiitaro, inoo kei, okamoto keito, takaki yuya

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lovetoosweet September 6 2010, 22:17:20 UTC
I FAIL AS A STALKER. I shouldn't have written and just stalked your journal :|

"Stupid, stupid, stupid..." and then he couldn't tell anymore, whether he was referring to himself or to the other boy.
Awwww, this hit something within me.

"On the contrary, he asked me to come up and check to make sure you were okay."
I hate you for being sweet Ryu-chan >:|

"When Inoo got jealous, he'd scheme up ways to get clients away from me, like prank call them, threaten them, bribe them, set them up with someone else, sneak cockroaches in their snacks, some other unpleasant things I'm not aware of and don't really want to know, either."
ROFLMAO! Jealous!Inoo is epic! I want to see that O_O

"I didn't run off," Chinen tried to explain. "He told me to go away, so..." His heart got twisted up, remembering the abrupt way he'd been brushed off. He pulled his knees up to his chest, as though the action could protect himself from all the pain that was pricking him from the inside out.
I feel the pain as well D:

"Wouldn't that mean I l-like R-ryutaro ( ... )

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hammiexsquirrel September 7 2010, 21:17:21 UTC
NO NO NO, GO WRITE. AND THEN POST. THEN WRITE MORE. AND POST MORE. YEAH YEAH? :DDDDDD

I feel a bit bad for him there ;v;

Hey, he knew Chinen was upset cuz of him since unlike idiot!Ryutaro, cold!Ryutaro knows whut's going on :/

haha, I'm too lazy to write that XDDD So you can imagine lmao

The pain will be gone soon :D

He did....sorta XD

Yeah, chinen can't deny his feelings any longer <3 Oh but the poor kid is still trying

Yay! You caught the jealous!Ryutaro I attempted to insert! :D *happy*

hahaha yes he is XD

....I have nothing more to say about Inoo XD Except he is awesome here

Yup yup! Had to force him into another one XD Now we just need Myojo or something to force him into a dress :D

I WANT MORE TOO. CHAPTER 12?! YEAH YEAH?

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lovetoosweet September 8 2010, 05:19:43 UTC
NAH, READ MORE AND COMMENT MORE AND POST LATER XDDD BETTER <3 XDDD

I did too D: I hate those kind of scenes cause it makes my heart ache :|

Awwww D: that's cause cold!Ryutaro likes Chinen too but idiot!Ryutaro does not...yet

*imagines* ROFLMAO

No more angst? D:

THAT'S CAUSE WE NEED MORE CHIITARO XDDDD

Haha not that hard to spot XD

HE IS HE IS HE IS XD INOO FTW XD

ROFLMAO. Johnny wouldn't want the world to know how pretty Chinen would look in a dress XD

ALREADY POSTED XD

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hammiexsquirrel September 8 2010, 20:47:20 UTC
HAHA ANSWER THE SPAMMAGE AND THEN POST? xD I SHALL DO THAT TOO >33

But the angst <3

Idiot!Ryutaro will fall for Chinen soon! No one can resist that squirrel for long

Nah, sweet fluff that made my friend say was too corny XD

I thought the jealousy might have been too subtle :/

B-BUT THINK HOW MUCH BETTER JUMP WOULD SELL IF THEY HAD A "GIRL" MASCOT

HOW ABOUT FOURTEEN? XDDDDDDDDDD

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lovetoosweet September 8 2010, 21:59:03 UTC
LOL I DO THAT EVERYTIME :D But I only have a few posts to spam, unlike you XD

The angst <3

Reaaaaaaaaaally? *checks plot notebook* But it's still a long way to go~ XDDD

Sweet fluff are corny, that's why they're sweet in the first place :D

It wasn't XD

SOME JAPANESE FANS ARE CRAZY, THEY DON'T WANT GIRL MASCOTS even if it's Chinen

Mebe later...or tomorrow XDDD

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anilee0510 September 8 2010, 22:17:45 UTC
Lmao, it's okay for me, it teaches me how to type faster XD

;_______________; C-can't you humor me for a bit!?

It takes a lot to make her say something is corny though. then again, Chiitaro isn't her OTP...........

;v; CAN'T WE SEE HIM CROSS-DRESS FOR THE FUN OF IT THEN? RYUTARO CERTAINLY WANTS TO SEE XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

LATER LATER LATER LATER LATER

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lovetoosweet September 8 2010, 22:55:27 UTC
So spamming actually helps XD It's an exercise now XDDD

Meh XD I still say it's a long way to go. About 5 more chapters? XD

Owwwww. My friends aren't into JUMP D:

HAHAHAHAHAHA CERTAINLY HE DOES XDDD

Nah, probably tomorrow. I was supposed to write it up now and all but the spamming got the better of me XD

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hammiexsquirrel September 9 2010, 06:58:07 UTC
Indeed it is!

MEH! That's not too bad. Two chapters tomorrow, and then at least one every day after that :DDD

Only one friend is into JUMP and fanfics. And my OTP kills three of her OTP's by simply BEING my OTP. We have a strange relationship XD

Darn the spammage, but I love it too xD

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lovetoosweet September 9 2010, 21:07:09 UTC
So that means more spamming in the future XDDD

That means you'll be getting it next week, not such a long way to go XD

Luck you :| No JUMP friends here :|

Hahaha. I'd be writing it now anyway XD

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hammiexsquirrel September 9 2010, 21:45:49 UTC
nope, considering I can go and reread the past chapters too :D

Lucky indeed. Well, she's the one who got me into the fandom in the first place too XD

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lovetoosweet September 10 2010, 01:02:30 UTC
I have so many chapters :| If only the other parts aren't important, I would have cut them out all :|

Wow, a real good friend! I pulled myself to the fandom by well, me D:

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hammiexsquirrel September 10 2010, 01:31:41 UTC
I should start printing out the early chapters. NO! NOT A BIT OF THIS AWESOME SERIES SHOULD BE CUT OUT DDDDDDDDDD:

Nah, she more or less dragged me kicking and screaming into the fandom. I didn't want to get obsessed with a bunch of little boys, cuz I was afraid I go pedo over them. Turns out, I am going pedo over them :/

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lovetoosweet September 10 2010, 02:17:46 UTC
Sometimes I am tempted, like earlier XD If I cut it out, from 24 it would then be 21 XD

I'm glad she did though, cause I wouldn't have the chance to your awesome works if she didn't XD

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hammiexsquirrel September 10 2010, 03:17:42 UTC
Ooh~ power of revision. Philander was originally 7 chapters, extended to 13 at one point, and finally culled to 11 XD

I am too, otherwise I wouldn't have known about your awesome stories <3

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lovetoosweet September 10 2010, 04:01:20 UTC
WHY CUT IT DOWN TO 11 D: WHERE'S 12 and 13?!? D:

Meh, if you didn't write Best Rivals, TTL wouldn't be here D8

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hammiexsquirrel September 10 2010, 04:10:22 UTC
LMAO cuz it was too irrelevant XD In the end, I culled out about 4000 words out of Philander XD

Meh, if Myojo didn't have their annual ranking thing, Best Rivals wouln't have been written

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