Philander [Chapter 5]

Sep 02, 2010 08:20

Author: Ani
Genre:  AU, romance
Rating: PG
Pairing: Chiitaro
Word Count: 1941
Summary: In which Ryutaro is working as a host and Chinen's sister winds up with an unfair debt.
Disclaimer: I don't own JE
Dedication: lovetoosweet because she is just amazing and I promised her one. It's thanks to her that I am obsessively revising this series over and over like a ( Read more... )

fanfiction: multi-chapter, series: philander, p: chiitaro, morimoto ryutaro, chinen yuuri, yabu kota

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lovetoosweet September 2 2010, 18:48:02 UTC
g/khgsgh;stetdsgsghdgksdgsdkgsdgk!!
THIS LITERALLY GOT ME JUMPING OFF MY CHAIR cuz I remembered the promise of fluff and kisses XD.

I would put off the fangirling on your writing for later :D

Chinen pulled himself out from under the bed, coughing and sneezing as a horde of dust bunnies attacked him mercilessly. "When was the last time you cleaned your room?"
I feel sorry for Chinen :/ Dust bunnies are eeeeeeeevil!

"How do I look?"
You look hot, Ryutaro XD

As Ryutaro slipped the jacket on, Chinen's breathing got faster as did his heart. Crap, why was it pounding so hard? The outfit seemed to have been tailor-made for the other boy, it fit so perfectly and Ryutaro was looking so - Chinen settled for 'mature' because he didn't want to acknowledge what he really thought. He looked every part of a host and could have easily passed for a high schooler without question. MAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA CHINEN IS FREAKING HYPERVENTILATING! *pats Chinen on the back* It's okay, we understand how hot Ryutaro is and you can't help yourself *nods ( ... )

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hammiexsquirrel September 3 2010, 16:51:29 UTC
EPICALLY LONG COMMENT MADE MY DAY 8'D

LMAO

I AGREEEE~ I sniffle and my eyes itch when dust bunnies start to breed D: They're worse than real bunnies!

Of course he does, in that sort of outfit XD

Poor Chinen, his mind is spazzing so much at the moment xD Then again, it is Ryutaro's fault for looking so hot

hahahaha, Chinen automatically starts to lie when he panics XD Or he'll spill the beans whatever works towards the fluffy kisses :D

XD Your comment made me think of that one time Chinen kept squishing Ryutaro's cheeks and Ryutaro kept trying to push him away BUT HE WAS SECRETLY SMILING

Ah, but Ryutaro is teasing him there =D

Ryutaro's kiss was too much for him to handle I would start spazzing worse than him

lmao, actually Ryutaro- *zips mouth* never mind

Chinen might not have made a full recovery had Ryutaro given him a third kiss XD It will come again! but won't be as fluffy due to the circumstances

Rereading this, I think I might have overdone the fluffiness XD OMG I love holding hands <3 It's just too cute and ( ... )

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lovetoosweet September 5 2010, 19:10:20 UTC
RIGHT! D: I have asthma that's why dust bunnies are my rivals >:/

I think he does, whatever he wears XD

HAHAHAHAAHA YEAH RYUTARO IS TO BLAME XD It should be illegal to be THAT hot D:

More lies then :D so more fluffy kisses that melts my brain

Tease more! XDD

Hahahaha Chiitaro kisses kills it's a miracle you're still alive after writing that ffvhdfadf kiss :D

THAT's UNFAIR! D:

IT IS IT IS BUT NOR OVERDONE XDDDDD I love fluff cause I can't seem to write one without going through angst first.

Fail stalker is back :D But I have school so I need to come back tomorrow D:

HAHAHAHAHHA definitely right about Chiitaro killing the brain. Naaaah, Yabu did good in entering, I was surprised he actually sounded grouchy at first XD

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hammiexsquirrel September 6 2010, 21:46:46 UTC
D: That's terrible!

Or nothing at all XD *shot and killed*

I agree with that statement so much XD The idea of Ryutaro being illegal just make him seem........hotter OTL

Suuuure XD Or when he spills the beans, Ryutaro thinks he's being too cute and gives him the fluffy kisses :D

Always! XD

For sure. Oh, you have no idea how many breaks I had to take to rest my poor brain whenever I try to write a kiss scene for them. It's even worse when they're making out @__@

Well, Ryutaro will tell Chinen the truth in the last chapter XD Hint: he's still a kid, even if he's a host :D

LMAO I work like it's a sandwich: I have fluffy, fluff fluff moments, then I angst and emo them, then they end up happy, together, and more fluffiness XD

WELCOME BACK PLEASE UPDATE NOW *shot*

Yeah, figured as much XD If I had been the reader, I would be thinking "SCREW YABU, MORE CHIITARO" XD lmao, Yabu thought Ryutaro was cutting work, so he got cranky. He's had to lecture Ryutaro before XD

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lovetoosweet September 6 2010, 22:04:35 UTC
yeah D: I am also in danger of hyperventilation :|

I SHOULD'VE KNOWN! although I have to agree HAHAHAHA

Tsk. The only word that register to mind is HOT ROFLMAO XD

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. I want MORE! *goes off to read Chapter 9*

Oh, poor brain. But it's all good. *pats brain* You did a good job with the kissing scene and hopefully, making out in the future

OOOOHHH. I love fics where the reason is because Ryutaro is still a kid! guilty for writing such fics

As long as there is angst, I am happy <3

I WILL, I WILL XD Although it's postponed to later due to your update *laughs evilly*

HAHAHA. Although, I did feel that XDDD Yabu-mama(nager) always very responsible XD

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hammiexsquirrel September 6 2010, 22:28:49 UTC
Fic writers' job hazard: high risks of losing breath due to hyperventilating while at work

I think we had a similar convo before XD

Yes, makes me wish my vocab was a bit bigger XD

haha, that's for chapter 11 I think

awww's, thank you >///< Hopefully, it wouldn't be too crappy @_@ I just can't write those scenes smoothly, I dunno how others do it so well

LMAO, well, it's revealed a bit more subtly, but the basic reason is cuz he's a kid, even if it's not said straight out like that spoiler and I love those fics of yours Admiration vs Love right? <3

Always must have the angst XD It's what makes the fluff so much fluffier >w<

D: NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU~ should have updated later XD

He is, thus he is the manager and can keep Ryutaro safe =3

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lovetoosweet September 6 2010, 22:38:16 UTC
YES YES YES. And when reading fics XDDDD

yeah we did, although you didn't mention the umm, the no clothes XDDDDDD

Read encyclopedia and dictionaries! Boring but helpful XD guilty for doing so

*waits patiently* NOW! XDDDD

I don't know as well, I suck at kissing scene so I tend to never write one XDDD

He is, he is. Awwww, I'm too excited now! Haahaha XD no more spoilers? XDDD Yeah XD You do remember Hahaha. I had fun writing that, first Chiitaro fic ever XD

Cause there was angst to make it fluffy XDDDD

NAAAAAAAAAAAAH :D Good timing for update XDDD Although it made me stop writing XDDDD

Very responsible, indeed XD

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hammiexsquirrel September 7 2010, 00:47:29 UTC
Other risks include hurting oneself when a stalked fic is updated and one goes spastic at a desk/table

I swear I said "nothing at all" before as well. Oh wells XD

lmao, I stalk dictionary.com when I'm that bored. That's how I found the title to this series XD

Only if you put up chapter 12! XD

I just love to imagine them kissing cuz I'm fangirl like that and I was envious of the way other fic writers wrote their amazingly awesome kiss scenes. So I kept practicing XD

Er...not sure whut else to spoil XD

I remember reading that and spazzing out when I finished, I had my "OMG AMAZING NEW FIC WRITER TO STALK" moment

Strangely, he doesn't stop Ryutaro from harassing Chinen. O.o whatever XD

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lovetoosweet September 7 2010, 01:06:59 UTC
HAAHAHHAHAA THAT TOO! XDDD And I sometimes hit my foot with the table for too much spazzing XDDD

*bad memory*

HAHAHAHAA dictionary.com is now a prompt generator too? :)

I'm posting it tomorrow XDDD *too excited for what will happen on Chapter 12 HAHAHHHAA*

WHAT FANGIRL WOULD NOT K?DHJWVFF WANT THAT??

HAHAHAHA *blushes* First Chiitaro fic was successful then XD cause I was thinking "Ah, this sucks." Oh yeah, I used to only write YamaChii then...I think I stopped writing YamaChii now D:

That's cause he ships it too :D

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hammiexsquirrel September 7 2010, 20:59:53 UTC
I also bang my head against the chair, table, or laptop XD

I could be hallucinating

Well, they have that "word a day" feature, too XD

WHUT'S GONNA HAPPEN IN CHAPTER 12?!

XDDDDDDDDDDD NOT ME, I LOVE TO IMAGINE IT <3 and then fail at writing it out

It was very sweet and angsty, but ended happy :D haha, I used to be able to write anything. Now I can't write Yamachii or Dairyu to save my life because it'll interfere with Chiitaro

<3333 I want a manager that ships chiitaro XD

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lovetoosweet September 7 2010, 22:03:26 UTC
Must hurt a lot XDDDD

Nah, I think I just have bad memory D:

Totally don't know that. But I won't be needing prompts, cause I need to write my sister her YamadaOC (her) fic I promised after she bribed with lots and lots and lots of money for food XDDD

YOU ALREADY READ IT XDDD

the kissing does not fail :D

Re-read it yesterday, kinda funny cause I think it's nonsense XDDD HAHAHAHA THE BIGGEST PROBLEM XD

I want Johnny to ship Chiitaro :D

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hammiexsquirrel September 7 2010, 22:12:05 UTC
It does XD And then I start yelling at the air

haha, it's okay XD

I use dictionary.com for its thesaurus feature while writing fic :D Meh, I wish my friend would at least bribe me with Chiitaro fics, but she's like my best friend, so I owe her, even though I don't really, though I do........ XD

I MEANT CHAPTER 13 XDDDDDDDDDD

In my eyes, it does. The way I imagined it is always so much better than what I actually write down D:

Yeeeeaah, I let my bias rule me XD

..................I agree. Start writing letters? :D

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lovetoosweet September 8 2010, 04:58:16 UTC
THAT, I do too XD

HAHAHAHA Bribing is fun XD And it gets you something you shouldn't really be having...especially since my sister is still 12years old XDDD

O_O Something could even be better than the one you write? D:

Too bad Chiitaro is not yet my number 1 bias, Ohmiya still rule my heart i tend to get all angry when matsumiya or juntoshi or any other pairing gets in the way of Ohmiya

YEAH XDDDD Or at least something like what he did with Ohmiya SK D: An official pairing.

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hammiexsquirrel September 8 2010, 20:27:12 UTC
Oh dear XDDDD Don't corrupt her poor, innocent mind just yet XD

Yeah, my imagination, where everything I put down on paper (metaphorically) originates from XD

Always Chiitaro for me <3 Though others have taken up spaces next to them XD oh, I get like that when I see Yamachii and Dairyu, but I try not to let it get to me XD

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lovetoosweet September 8 2010, 22:07:33 UTC
Already corrupted, doesn't need me to do so. She does it on her own pft. She's a mature 12 year old, and a tall one at that.

Hahahaha. XDDDD I want to see the imaginations~

I could tell that. Chiitaro's moving up though, I didn't know they were already becoming a bias on my ChinenAnyone pairings :|

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anilee0510 September 8 2010, 22:23:51 UTC
What's with this pattern of young children corrupted at an early age these days? xD

All up in my head, technology's not advanced enough for it XD But the imaginations are often higher ratings than what I dare write down xDD Now I sound perverted

Yeah, Chiitaro took over before I even realized what happened. By then, I couldn't bring myself to read Yamachii anymore :/

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