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secretsolitaire July 25 2008, 01:50:26 UTC
Oh god. *sniffles* This whole thing just breaks me, especially the ring part, and Whatever you think, whatever else he said or did, it was always you for him, since we were kids. And the confused kiss followed by guilt felt very real to me.

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ozma_katiebell July 26 2008, 01:52:14 UTC
Thanks for reading!. I don't know what it is, but this just flowed. Plus I love the idea of Fred carrying a torch for her all along but being all casual about it at the Yule Ball.

Perfect icon!

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shiiki July 25 2008, 04:41:50 UTC
This was really, really powerful - the release of both their grief into each other for that one moment. This fic really shows that baby step forward for both of them. Nice work!

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ozma_katiebell July 26 2008, 01:53:36 UTC
Thanks a lot! I have such a problem with this ship (post DH) normally, so I don't know where this came from. Too much time trying to get inside George's head, I suppose.

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ladybirdington July 25 2008, 19:19:46 UTC
OH GOD THE ANGST.

Why? It was bad enough jkr killed him and then you had to go and give him plans of proposing?!?

*sobs*

I love/hate you. And this was brilliant.

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ozma_katiebell July 26 2008, 01:54:39 UTC
Isn't it just awful? I didn't even plan it that way, it was just all of a sudden drag out a ring, and the rest of the fic came from there.
Thanks for reading!

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mrsquizzical July 25 2008, 23:42:27 UTC
oh gorgeous!

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ozma_katiebell July 26 2008, 01:55:32 UTC
Thank you! I am slightly squicked by this concept, so of course I had to tackle the prompt!

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exartemarte July 26 2008, 12:56:35 UTC
I really like the way you dealt with this. The way it ended was a surprise - I didn't think that was where it was going - but it worked very well and I found it entirely convincing. The ring was a great idea.

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ozma_katiebell July 27 2008, 17:57:45 UTC
Thanks! That was where it started, really, the idea of finding things you never knew about him among his possessions.

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