Oh god. *sniffles* This whole thing just breaks me, especially the ring part, and Whatever you think, whatever else he said or did, it was always you for him, since we were kids. And the confused kiss followed by guilt felt very real to me.
Thanks for reading!. I don't know what it is, but this just flowed. Plus I love the idea of Fred carrying a torch for her all along but being all casual about it at the Yule Ball.
This was really, really powerful - the release of both their grief into each other for that one moment. This fic really shows that baby step forward for both of them. Nice work!
Thanks a lot! I have such a problem with this ship (post DH) normally, so I don't know where this came from. Too much time trying to get inside George's head, I suppose.
Isn't it just awful? I didn't even plan it that way, it was just all of a sudden drag out a ring, and the rest of the fic came from there. Thanks for reading!
I really like the way you dealt with this. The way it ended was a surprise - I didn't think that was where it was going - but it worked very well and I found it entirely convincing. The ring was a great idea.
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Why? It was bad enough jkr killed him and then you had to go and give him plans of proposing?!?
*sobs*
I love/hate you. And this was brilliant.
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Thanks for reading!
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